All Comments on 'Last Affair with Mom'

As always, thank you for reading, I hope you've enjoyed this. Take care of yourself. And thanks to pendragon23 for a few excerpts.

heyall

Once again you have hit a home run. GREAT STORY !!

I like the story. Albeit being short, it does provide a springboard to all sorts of possibilities.

The one "takeaway" is that we human beings can, and do, create a variety of bridges between ourselves to answer any and all challenges. For example, Wars and post Wars bring out this aspect in our lives. I can say that I resulted from Hitler's war in Europe that brought two people, Slavic, together thousands of miles away from their birthplaces, joined because of Stalin's avarice. I have talked with people who survived the experiences from genocide by the two dictators aforementioned.

The story can easily be just a small piece of the fabric we call humanity. Sadly, we do have those who will take advantage of people who just want to "be themselves."

You left me wanting more, so good.

Outstanding!!!!! Not enough Stars to give this the highest rating it deserves.

Michael needs to give Tiffany and elena a baby bump.

Well imagined, well written. Elena is a real woman. I think the greatest part of the story is how even the extremely religious can justify their sins (I'm not saying incest is a sin, but the church does). A bit of a Graham Greene feel to it, although Elena doesn't appear to feel the guilt as much as Greene's characters do.

An interesting tale

That was one 'hell' of a really great short story and without a doubt in my mind the best of the best l have read in my 73 years. Thank you Heyall for the time preparing the story and putting it on Litroctica for us all to read. Jil.

Excellent story while same time sensual. Love between mothers and sons are well documented, if not just between the two.A mother’s embrace, soft as silk and arousing. Sharing her love right after giving birth, the son sucking at her breast for for first time is always the bond between both.

Remembering my mother when a child, playing and hiding under her dress or apron, smelling & feeling her softness as well as her scent will never leave my memory. Mother has passed on, however never lost from my mind’s attic of such slight intimacy we shared as a child.

Totally great HeyAll... It touched all my HOT buttons, and well as provoking my mind!! I'm not certain whether it's all good, or not, but the vision of mom eating wife's pussy is seriously HOT!!!

Somewhat weird but enjoyable.

Good as always. Very well thought out.

Enjoyed it greatly.

Amazing story.

Very nice story with an elegant way of putting that mom needed her son to change into a man.

AWWWsome !!!!!

Lovely story, once I started I couldn’t stop reading it. Look forward to reading more of your work

‘Twas a great read! One of your best!!

A lot of thought went into this story, it was very believable, and told very well. I've no doubt that this activity happens in today's world.

WOW!

Whoa! That was different! Very good!