All Comments on 'Last Few Days of Summer'

!992 was a great year for me too!

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Ohh my goodness this is a wonderful story that I look forward to reading again and again! This is such a sweet story!!! Thank You so much for sharing this wonderful story!

Great story and a satisfying ending. Thanks

Most excellent story. Thank you

Beautifully written, thanks for posting

Such a wonderful story

Fantastic story and very well written! If was possible, I'd give you more than 5 stars.

Great story, thanks for offering it here. Who wouldn't have wanted to learn the "ropes" from a slightly older woman? Though... it wasn't so bad to learn things on-the-fly either!

Excellent writing that certainly worked from an erotic point of view. I do think Will came across as somewhat emotionless, with little to no nerves or excitement or impatience or contemplation of this life changing experience Charity was giving him (beyond the fact he was indeed contemplating the moment later in life). Having said that, I thoroughly enjoyed the story and stayed up reading past midnight, so it’s not a major issue. 5 stars.

Amazing story, well done

Wonderful story. Well written.

The plot was good and it built well; very classy.

The English and grammar were superb.

I loved it Tironyx.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Love this story. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Frankie.

brought back some of my past memories of the summer of 64" in Southampton, NY.

the sea, the sand, the beetles, and the love.

Briliant !!!! 5* +++

First of your stories i`ve read.....won`t be the last.

Cannot see a thing wrong with it. Good concept, well written, no 9bvious errors and I found the ending with Michelle thoughts quite moving.

5⛤

Awesome!

A brilliant wonderful story. Can't get better than this. Thank you! 5 stars.

I very much understand the scene where Will realizes that he has what it takes to please an older woman. I experienced the same thing in real life with mine. It’s astonishing what that can do to the self confidence of a timid guy. 5 stars here.

I never tire of enjoying your stories. You did throw me a curve ball on the ending, or at least what I hoped it would be. A couple tweaks to the last few paragraphs and his loving wife would come up behind him as he reminisced, asking if he was coming to bed for his dessert. He would answer, "Chari, did I ever tell you how much I love you?"... 5*

Great story. An interesting take on the coming of age story. Interesting ending. I need to read more of your stories.

Lovely tale, a young man’s dream, a slightly older woman’s feast. It was delightfully told and the untitled epilogue was perfect. Great job, Trionyx, and best wishes in the contest. 5*

Amazing, fun and entertaining. A shame that they never found a way to reconnect to reminisce and share their individual successes.

Wonderful, entertaining and introspective!

This is the winner! Darrel

Great story. I like how positive it was.

Wonderful story, and I hope the winner!!

Such a wonderful first time story. Thank you for it. 5 stars.

You built up a slow-and-steady pace to quite the explosion, metaphorically and physically in about every sense I could imagine. What impressed me most was how mannered you approached using Charity (Michelle) to instruct him on how to talk to a female, be gentlemanly, considerate and otherwise show him when to lead and when to let her lead. You balanced all this well--and especially the dialogue, dating, kissing and everything leading up to her "desserting" him. Finally, I appreciate the 50th b-day reflection on both Will's then Michelle's part. About the only obvious thing about the story was that he would NOT end up with her, but you handed us a pleasant change by materializing Michelle at the end of the story to say "goodbye" in the metaphorical sense. Very well done and I sure hope your story wins, as it's so well constructed and executed! 5

Outstanding! I could have been a better husband if I had her class ahead of all else.

Thanks for this sweet, heartwarming, and compelling tale.

Terrific, complete story! Nice wrap up at end.

Loved it! Good job!

Nicely done. Didn't strain the limits of plausibility to any great extent.

Great story. I loved the way it was written, a very good style. Thank you

A lovely sensitive story. If only everyone's introduction to loving sex could so beautiful.

Having an experienced Chari teach Will the "ins and outs" of sex made it a worthwhile read. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Thanks.

I want to thank everyone for their votes and kind remarks. The story did not win the Summer Lovin’ contest but as best I can tell, it came in fourth place. It is now high on the all time list for First Time stories for which I am very honored. Such results and your comments ensure I will continue pound away on the keyboard. Stay tuned.

Wow! How have I missed your stories? This was so well written and error free and a wonderful fantasy so well delivered. Five stars and a follow so I don't miss any new posts. Oh and a very rare fav.

I'll be checking out the rest of your library while watching for the new stuff! 😀

Cheers

SAGE

Such a beautiful story. Real characters with some depth. I wish every young man could have Wills experience with learning about women. The sex scenes where smooth and hot. I've got some catching up to do on your work.

Lovely premise.

Beautifully written.

Too bad she thought he was a natural at all things sexual. Would have been better if she had to give him instructions/directions about what she wanted him to do, and how to do it, and how it felt to her. And dialog about what he seemed to like best would have helped too.

Some discussion about his masturbation practices would have helped. How often? How did he do it? What sort of stimulants did he use (dirty magazines, books, etc.)?

What did he like the best about her body?

A bit of titty fucking.

Some involvement of/with her ass, perhaps. Giving him the option to lick her asshole while performing cunnilingus.

Four stars.

Great story. Well structured over 5 episodes building up the suspense. This boy was very lucky to find someone to teach him. Most of us never learn how women work!

Lovely - warm, generous, believable enough. And so simple and positive!

One word. Fantastic.

Nice story. I was very impressed, especially with the retrospective ending with Charity. It seemed a bit clinical at times, but overall was well written and very Interesting. Thanks for your contribution.

Well done and maybe a little better than Summer of 42. Looking forward to more of your work.

Thanks

WOW. Amazing story. I like your writing style!!!

Best write up ever.

I would suggest for this story to be made a movie

Just like HARRY POTTER stories became a movie, I believe this could make a good sequel.

Cheers Trionyx

Looking forward to more amazing stories

Excellent!!!!

Bittersweet. I was abused emotionally, physically and sexually throughout my childhood. When I did meet sex-positive loving women, I felt inferior and hid my feelings. Maybe I will heal the remaining wounds and attract such women… but, given that my career is messily dying as I approach retirement age, it seems more likely that my love life will be like that.

well written. nice build-up. nice twist to the end. excellent.

I like how in the end it's not about the sex, but about the emotions and experiences.

It was not so much a story but an instruction manual, one which I shall have to study again if I can get the OK for the job.

I read this a while back and happened upon it again. Enjoyed just as much the second time.

Well written and educational - every young man should have a woman like that help him.

Hip hip hooray! Hip hip hooray! Hip hip hooray!

Well done!

It is the human feelings that make such a tender, loving piece of art. Loved it.

Enjoyed the story from start to finish!! Good job!!!

Very realistic description. I learned some of what Trionyx disclosed so effectively by reading, "Everything You Always Wanted to Know About Sex; But Were Afraid to Ask, " by David Reuben, 1969 #1 Best Seller.

This material so well done it should be included in every sex education class. When the guys read this in class

they will need to keep their 3 ring binder in their lap. For fun I think I will read David Reuben again.

Wonderful, really well written and paced! Great flashback to how fortunate I was to have a father that talked me through much of what Chari taught Will, his summary line: never fuck a hole you haven’t eaten thoroughly!

Doesn't Get Any Better Than This!

Re-read this great story today. Still great! Voted for it a minute ago. Cheers. Frankie

I just reread this and loved it all over again! A lovely gentle tale. What an introduction to loving sex!

Great Love Story and Great Romance Story, What is the difference between the two and How do we really know the difference between first love or first lust? What really makes the difference is what we learn from the both. A lesson well taught and a lesson well learned. Keep up the great writing and story telling you do an outstanding job of both.

that was a great story loved it from the beginning to the end.

It was really very very good, enjoyed the whole story. Loved it, man

Absolutely beautiful love they shared is what love truly is. The sex was soft and exciting.

Tender, well crafted love story beautifully told. Worth re-reading.

Fantastic story and as well as sexy, the closing page brought a bit of a tear to my eyes.

The best sexually exciting and wonderfully gentle story I’ve ever read. Thanks.

Excellent sexually exciting story teaching a shy young man how to make love to a woman. I was that shy young man and it would have been extremely helpful to me. I really enjoyed reading your story

What a memory for a young man to have. I can see where looking back could give him great joy. While the way they parted, it was most likely best for both. 5*.

I’ve read this three times and enjoy it more each time. Thanks for a wonderful warm loving story.

Loved the story. Sorry I didn’t read it 50 years ago. Classy ending!

Well done

You are a magnificent writer and I've enjoyed all your stories so far. This has to be my favorite.

wonderful story

Wonderful. I enjoyed it very much.

This would have been a great read 50 years ago. Or a great read for my four sons 10 years ago. Or a great read for their sons fifteen years from now. Wisdom is the worst education of all. It's simply realizing how stupid you once were.

Another EXCELLENT Creation!

THANK YOU !

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Wow, what a very touching story. I liked how you wrapped things up at the end.

definitely worth the 5 star rating. Love how the whole story line was tied up with a neat "little bow" in the end.

Very well written. Technically and artistically. One of the better stories that I have read on Lit in over 20 years of reading. Also great ending, the reader is not left in the air. BT

A+

Wonderful!

Definitely the best story I've ever read on here. A very tender story of an encounter between two people and the memories it left them with. I did not expect these emotions when I opened this website today.

That was the best story , it was fantastic , I will watch for your name on other stories...

Outstanding, thanks

After all of the great writing, it seems a shame that a fun reunion could not happen in a BRIEF encounter of two adults. Surely your imagination can produce that sequel...we hope!!