All Comments on 'Last Mission Ch. 06'

Really gd story but needed a lot more sex xx

This is a classic easy-to-read yarn that appeals to both men and women. All the sexploitative elements are present - a strong, sexy, deadly female lead; intricate plots of revenge; misplaced loyalty and betrayal; brutal violence and a whiff of sex. Overall, an unforgettable revenge series with echoes of Kill Bill.

It was quite entertaining although any explicit sex was missing, a disappointment on a porn site. Thank you for writing.

Thanks for sharing.

Well written,very intense. Some said short chapters, I say good pacing. Please continue

Based on the intended plot line, this could have been a heck of a story, but it falls flat both in its erotic and suspenseful impact. Keep trying but this one just doesn't make it.

A pretty good start, though I did expect a bit more sex.

Dear readers,

This is my first series. Both positive and negative comments will spur me to write more. I have a thick skin, so please go ahead and be a critic!

Author of Last Mission

good story write anoter one

just F****ing brilliant!

right amount of sex and violence