All Comments on 'Latched Ch. 01'

probably could have kept to topic and spun it out to a novella rather than a too predictably straight finish from a fetish start...just a thought

Can't wait to latch again!

I actually agree. After I read through its not a great work. May continue it with less Hetero sex and more lactation fetish. Turn Liv into a live in tap.

I really loved this! I'm hoping there will be a Part II! :-)

Very hot, thank you

Part II has been submitted. Should see it soon.

Good premise.

But too short.

And too automatic.

Needed more in the way of preliminaries. More description of her breasts. And nipples.

Needed dialog about how full they were. And the opportunity for him to 'feel' how heavy they were.

Needed dialog about how much he liked them.

Needed many more details about the blowjob.

Three stars.