All Comments on 'Late'

by secretsinme

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Actually,

This was really hot. I loved it. Tell me, do chicks really ever think this way? Kinda makes you think that this is really the way it should be. My only complaint is the length of the story. Maybe you could have made it a little longer. Still, lots of fun. Thank you.

thebulletthebulletalmost 15 years ago
great story

very well done and damn! a different plot

ohioohioalmost 15 years ago
nice story

It is short but nonetheless very good. Unusual and even original for "Loving Wives" in that the couple are turned on by each other, not by outsiders. I hope you'll write some more! Thanks, ohio

apollonaapollonaalmost 15 years ago
Nice

This really worked. Sort but really sweet. Origional as others have said, but very entertaining. Would love to read more from you!

tastesgreattastesgreatalmost 15 years ago
Good Read!

Great 'Loving Wives' tale. Only problem is its length. Too short. Thanks...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Who am I to disagree?

Who am I to disagree with every commenter so far? This was a good piece of descriptive writing. But...you notice that I did not say story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I agree with...

Ohio et.al.But should be longer.Love to see what loser friends lives are like if they're not happy for her relationship.Ah,but don't they all start like this.Until the first time hubbys too tired!.Pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
He fingered her, put it in his mouth, didnt taste

or smell cum so if she did she did with condoms. Sorry folks never understood girls night out, going to bars, with dance floors, drinking and getting drunk. I've been in to many bars and clubs, women that do this do it for only one reason to meet men and to get laid. Yeah, they can rationalize all they want, we just want to have fun together. We dont want sex just a little fun. Wow, married, fun, couple, together, going out with other couples. Oh I remember all the ladies arent married some are divorced some are never married so cant leave them out. Nope if my wife started this she would be single ASAP. No need to wait on the lies and cum stains, STDs, and pregnancies with bastards. It really isnt a matter of trust as some claim after all what drunk is really trustworthy and how do you know she isnt getting drugged?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Being Bi

She of course knows why her panties are wet coming home late from ladies night.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
short but very good

It's a good first post, and the author will find out that most of the readers like to see a little longer story. More descriptive sex would lengthen the story. Thanks for the post and hope to see more work from the author.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not Sure

Their married but other than being short very good, thanks.

APeacefulPlaceTxAPeacefulPlaceTxalmost 15 years ago
How sad...

that the anons are so twisted by their sad experiences they can't even imagine a real loving wife. Giving low scores to a story like this shows why real women don't want to be around you.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyalmost 15 years ago
Loved it

Great. This is my understanding of what a loving wife is.

Keep writing, I want to read more.

-Joe-

bruce22bruce22almost 15 years ago
Enjoyable

Why bother going out with the girls? The only answer I can think of is to go somewhere that I do not want to go like a show at an antique dealers! Other than that it would be better to unwind with the SO. Also the gals or in other cases guys seem almost hostile to the idea of a happy marraige! Great story. On to the next story you have to tell us. Thanks

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 15 years ago
Very Nice story

A loving wife eh? Stranger things have happened.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story

Secrets - A very sensual, short story. Keep them coming.

AbctoyAbctoyabout 3 years ago

Good Loving Wifes short story.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 2 years ago

I always enjoy reading about a wife who truly loves her husband.

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Not bad at all. A bit thin, but not a gay husband in sight.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wow, an actual loving wife. Must be a unicorn.

QuintiusQuintius4 months ago
I'm surprised

This is an older story here but I'm kind of shocked at how low the score is. It's a bit on the short side but it's a hot little story with no cheating, no disrespectful sluts, and no cuck content. Just a loving wife showing hints of subby tendencies who's crazy about her husband but still reluctantly bows to peer pressure. None of the usual tropes that get stories in LW ratings bombed. I don't see any reason why it should be scored so low. It's a shame secretsinme didn't write any other stories. They had talent.

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