All Comments on 'Late Back'

Omg. Please tell me there's going to be a chapter 2. This was phenomenally written and captivating.

I agree completely with the previous comment! Damn. Had me going really good then you stop!!!!! AARGGGHHH. Hurry up with pt 2.

...........must be a Chapter 2............and more !

It's been submitted, thank you for your encouragement.

Need a second chapter full of love, affection, and most importantly SEX.

Daddy need to fuck her.

Raise your score from 3 to 5

It seems I should have made it clearer this was a first chapter not a self-contained story - I'm new around these parts and I hope you will be tolerant. I didn't quite know myself what it was going to turn out to be. I'm now working on Chapter 3 where things do escalate... but perhaps not quickly enough for some of you. Thanks again for your feedback and votes.

Her internal monologue is hilarious. Not often you find a character on here who is endearing in a non-sexual way, especially in a story that's pretty hot too.

You are kidding arent you?

Thanks for the warning, dickhead.

OK This is teriffic! It is really hot and I like that you concentrate on the buid up as well as the fucking. It is way hotter that way and if someone doesn’t like the first 2 or 3 parts of this hot story they shpuld read your two one-off stories. Please: Keep writing!

Teasing, is a great way to ensure the reader comes back for more.

Good opening. I want to read chapter 2 before I comment further, but I'm intrigued:)

A girl's first love is almost always her daddy, almost.

Has the makings of a good story. Her first experience sure sets her up to be thinking of her father or at the very least someone with verifiable experience for any future attempt. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.