by Romantic1
I loved this story. I am going through my own "trial period" although I dont have the feedback as was in your story. This story was very close to home about the thoughts of what all you have to change when you go from being care free to responsible. Granted I have lived on my own for years, but everything else seemed spot one. Great work please keep writing.
This is a great story -- just the right mix of original tale and sex. I know a lot of guys who needed someone like Margaret.
read this story and take note - but then most men are still big kids at heart - we just do things differently lol
The whole trouble with being a kid in America these days is that it's such a great life that we don't want to leave it behind! This coming of age--finally--story was written in a humorous vein, but in fact it hits home with most of your adult male readers. It's always the same: we'll grow up when and if there's a benefit in it. Positive feedback, as your hero calls it. Been there, got the tee shirt. What a lot of memories this story evokes! Thank you!
Loved the story. I thought there was a possibility that his parents may have hired Margaret to do the job. Not an unhappy ending, just a twist.
thank you