All Comments on 'Late Ch. 04'

Ahhhhhhhhhh I need to know what happens next. Amazing work again wish I could give it a higher rating thn 5 stars

great addition to the series. happy you decided to keep it going. thanks for sharing!

I'm enjoying the series, but it was overlay rough at the end of this chapter. Quite a pendulum swing from the beginning to the end. I'm really hoping the story will continue as it feels unresolved. Also, I'm feeling Jane will need to tone it down and get a balance between love and dominance for him.

Girl's got grammar and scintillating vocab. Did take 4 chaps to get to the good stuff.

Yes the sex was hot but you insist to call it (love/ lover) come on Mate. anyway I like your writing and I am waiting for what shall happen between them.

Oh my gosh is he actually going to put his foot down? That would be the first time I can recall a guy in one of these stories realizing he needs to walk out. I hope he can show her he's a person, not her toy. It's been forever since I've seen an actual futa love story. Here's hoping 🤞

I love this story! I don't understand the complaints about the domination, have you read any of thereshegoes123's other stories? More, more, more, more please!

Such a great story. I would love to read more episodes!

Wow great. Please write the Pt. 5 as well

Truly fantastic. Great descriptive language, both sex and plot. You have a great flow in your writing which is really enjoyable to read. I love the sex and developments, and I am really looking forward to your next masterpiece.

One of the best in its specific genre, hope for a couple more parts!

Please chapter 5 :(

Great writing. I have read all of your stories and loved them all. Please keep writing.

Need chapter 5 please! I really hope there is a happy ending in this.

Pretty amazing read so far. It's clearly to late to change anything and I am sure the author has already taken note. But it is a little jarring for me when the story is referencing things being in America, but all the characters speak as if there in the UK. Also the MC has two different dick sizes noted. Originally at 4inches and then at 3 inches during intercourse. I never do understand the mentality of making the guys small or micro-dicked in these stories. Still these are nitpicks for me. I am digging this story and will finish. 5 stars from me

I don't get it. She gave him the fucking of his life, bringing him to orgasm after orgasm, and now he doesn't want anything to do with her any more? One can only dream of sex that good! Why in the world would he want to bail on her after that?