All Comments on 'Late Ch. 05'

Loved it! Thank you for continuing the story it's truly amazing.

Fantastic as always! Excited for the next part!

Part six, you beautiful bastard! Part six!!!!

Its kind of weird, she knew she made a mistake last chapter, instead of apologizing, giving space or trying to talk about it, she tackles him down and gets close to him again which he requested she does not.

Also when he talked to her couldnt he just have said, why did you treat me like a fleshlight? In an attempt to talk to her about what he did not like…

Also he didnt go to training for weeks? And didnt speak to Terry for weeks and nobody asked about it? Kind of weird.

Im seeing vibes here that Terry loves being dominated and during this chapter it seems the Coach is more and more open to the idea of making sexual moves on her.. and Terrry knows her friend is with the Coach yet she gets aroused and flirts with the Coach. Maybe the coach is so sexy to her that she doesnt even register her betrayal if she goes further withthe coach?

I think it could go like this -> terry talks to fred -> fred tells how she roughly dominated him into a bitch -> terry gets jealous and wants the same then one of 2 things couldhappen

1. Terry explains to him that it shows just how much she lusts for him but does not actually love him because if she did like/love him that part of her should be able to control herself for his sake

2. Terry goes off and seduces the coach and Fred stays alone an miserable

God I love this sexual tension but I wish Jane got her dick sucked. Please don’t make us wait too long for more 🥺🙏

What a tease, need chapter 6!

Good Story, hoping it has a happy ending for freddy and the coach

I'm so glad you picked this story back up. It's honestly one of my favorites in any of the genres here on literotica. Hope to be able to read the next chapter soon.

Good story overall. Like the connection wit Freddie & Jane as long as her Dom is not overdone. She should focus more on love and making him happy. The Dean / Kevin thing sucks. I hope that gets fixed.

Holy crap. I’m so captured by the story and the character’s emotions that I forgot I’m on Literocia, and that is exactly what I usually look for in some stories. Love how its more than black and white with the relationship between Jane and Freddie. It feels very authentic and relatable. And so much do the details and inner dialogues inside the characters’ heads makes this feel so real like I’m really there. I hope you continue this because it is really good read.

I just read all of these and now I'm desperate to know what happens!

Great story 5 stars followed and favorite.

Please finish it! I gotta know! Can she get him back? She’s gotta get him back!!! Great story, all chapters are so well written. I can’t wait til she DESTROYS that asshole Dean😈and gets her lil Freddie back😍

oh man please posy the rest soon, I really hope they have a happy ending.

Wow, I've never wanted another story so bad. Please write the next part, hoping for a happy ending.

still hoping you'll come back and give us another chapter! huge fan of the series. thanks for sharing!

Finally I wholesome futa on male story I n which the futa actually cares for and feels remorse for her sub. Please update I would really like to see a happy ending plssss

Wen Part 6?

Please we need part 6!

This defo needs a part 6...

Dying to see the conclusion of this story!

Please make a part 6 you can’t make a good and possibly wholesome love story on a bad note like this please we need ittttt

Bro we fuckin need chapter 6

Yo just started this series comon need that chapter 6 like now

Please we need a conclusion 🙏