by thereshegoes123
Hi everyone, the italics didn't make it past formatting on the site, I'll try to re-upload another version which should have the italics in!
Probably one of my favorite story arcs on this site. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I just read this story again and I realized that they could have just skipped the entire fallout if they communicated even a bit better. She could have told him he loved him after the first time they had sex and it would have been solved. He could have just said he didn't feel respected over text and it would have been solved. It's so infuriating because it's realistic in a way.
What a hot story! I’m glad you continued it! I really hope you’ll do another chapter for Dream Girl too!!
like that Jane's controlling herself. Hate what's going on with Dean. They should all quit the team.
So, first off, I am a fan. You write some incredibly hot stories. However, for me, this series has become ruined. There's no coming back from this chapter. Matherson is allowing her team to be traumatized. There's no excuse for this. She has betrayed those under her care, and she did it because she violated policy bad enough to get fired. She should have been fired, or flat out quit, if her actions compromised her ability to take care of her team. Also, she's too much of a coward to actually apologize and communicate with her lover, who she obviously hurt. So, imo, she's become the villain of the story, and I'm pretty sure that's not what she was intended to be.
A good start, but you need to finish now. As others have said, you need to close up all the loose ends with the team now....
And Jane needs to learn boundaries.
Waiting for the next chapter...
It had been a long year checking every week or two for the next chapter of this wonderful story.
Please continue this amazing story that is developing into a wonderful relationship.