by thereshegoes123
God Damn! That was good! I truly hope you keep going with this story! Domestic bliss! I hope she keeps him plugged, collared an naked around the house!
So no fucking changed? Shes till a controlling uncaring bitch, what a waste of time to wait for tgis, expected more care from her after last few chapters, oh well another futaxmale series to put in the trash for me, dissapointed...
Your descriptive style of writing is on point... I felt like I was be pulled into the story... Really enjoyed it, look forward to reading more of your work :))
Dont know what the other anonymous comment is talking about. The character Development Jane got, being more loving torwards him is pretty damn obvious. They arent actually reading this
Ayo that was amazing, the wait is always worth it each chapter is a banger.
5/5
Absolutly fantastic! Its a lovely story about a boy/man who is discovering himself and some kind of BDSM - to understand that it is no harm to be submissiv or to be a slut with the right person.
Jane is a wonderful character too - she is searching for love with a submissiv boy and discovers so much potential in Freddie - not only sexual...
Simply perfect! I'm looking forward for the next chapters :)
Well, the story, all 7 parts of it, started off good, but it became kinda lame after he inexplicably just up and left her like he did. It's like she fulfilled every intimate desire he ever had, and he just up and leaves her like that? Really? That made no sense at all whatsoever.