All Comments on 'Late Night Comfort'

Sensational story I loved reading. Great job for your first story. Please keep this going so we get to experience what these two do from here on. Perhaps she moves in with him and they make babies.

This is well written but shows little knowledge of female anatomy. It is impossible for the penis to penetrate the womb. The muscles in the cervix won't permit penetration. Ask any woman who has had her cervix bumped by an over enthusiastic lover. It is incredibly painful and kills the mood.

An excellent story for a second chapter. Perhaps he can help her get accepted into his school so they can live thgether. Please continue the Romance.

Good first story. It would have been better without the talk about her losing her virginity to someone just before she fucks him though. Good romance development other than that.

Although short, the story was sweet and lovely. Well done.

Well done, and shows promise of more.

A truly beautiful story, very well written. Please keep up the good work.

Very touching. Well paced.

This is basically a series of words, not a story at all. We know nothing about their motivations really, only the nuts and bolts. Maybe next time, post more than just an outline for a sex scene.

Story shows much promise, the writing flowed smoothly and created a very warm and interesting tale which I hope the author will continue. Maybe having Chloe join him at college and let the relationship fully develop into something more Passionate. Well done. 5/5

Short and sweet, though as some others have said, it seems to be missing some padding. And I agree that mentioning she lost her virginity to some twat just before they have sex is a bit of a mood-killer. A second part could make up for this as we have only the beginning of their journey here.

Very nice! I like that this is a romantic story, not just a fuck fest. You captured their feelings for each other nicely. Great job!