by Master_Vassago
A great story ... Could use some descriptions of HER sxxy body,Like her petite/small breast.with pale pink auerola's,'N hard nipples,starting too turn red from the tension...
I love incest stories! And this is a good one for sure! Made me want to do her myself!
Great story.... but I second the idea of giving more descriptions.... that would have turned your great story into an amazing story. Keep up the great work!!!
more stories well done but maybe a little longer, would have been great to have dad or another bro. walk in thanks again very horney
At least you didn't make her 38DDD
Too bloody abrupt, it reads like fifth-grade writing, is undeveloped, unedited, and quite honestly, it sounds like it was written by someone who's never had sex with a woman before.
Not to say that it doesn't have potential if it was written with a little more patience. Why even have them be brother and sister? There was no time to develop an... nevermind.
Decent story but you need a little more story line instead of just jumping straight to sex. I'll give u 3 stars for it.