All Comments on 'Lateness & Lying'

Nice story from a new author. Thanks. The care between them was evident. I was a little squicked that he took her ass without prep. He punished her for the lateness and the lie. Punishment should have been over. The plan was explore her ass. To go full steam ahead like that wouldn't make her (me?) eager to jump into new things in the future. But that is me stepping into your story. See, you wrote it so well that was easy for the reader to do. :) Look forward to more from you. 5*

I liked the story its great. Nice short story that don't need anythiing more. Thanks