All Comments on 'Laundry Day'

u are good

I agree with the comment above. =)

You have the potential to be a great writer. Keep

writing.

this was a really good story, there could have been more detail and I hope to read more from u, I really hope u write more stories and I m sure they will be better and hotter as u write them, thank u

Keep it up young lady.

Fantastic! The writing is superb.

hopefully you will keep writing and post them ASAP

only thing would of liked is a bit more of a back story,(not just parents died,aunt got us apartment)

So, is Em now prego or not? Will we hear more of the story of Em and Ian? And is Em short for Emily, Emma, or something else? Nice touch, Em getting off from the vibrations of the washer, setting her up for Ian's attentions.

Well written and realistic

Very well Written, Nicely done... can't wait for more...

Made me so wet! I hope she gets pregnant ;)

Give Ian the sexy characteristic of chest hair -- just enough for his sister to stroke ever so lovingly.

Always a little weird when you see your own name...

plus some romance-worth following up with more chapters on them-nicely written-thanks

Enjoyable but a little more build-up would have been nice. Keep writing, definitely.

Loved it. Had just the right amount of tenderness to make it endearing, and had plenty of what everybody turned up for to read. : )

Sweet story! Vanilla style the best!

it should have concluded with, "even before he pulled out, i knew i was pregnant with My brothers baby." that would have made it really hot.