All Comments on 'Laundry Day'

it should have concluded with, "even before he pulled out, i knew i was pregnant with My brothers baby." that would have made it really hot.

Sweet story! Vanilla style the best!

Loved it. Had just the right amount of tenderness to make it endearing, and had plenty of what everybody turned up for to read. : )

Enjoyable but a little more build-up would have been nice. Keep writing, definitely.

plus some romance-worth following up with more chapters on them-nicely written-thanks

Always a little weird when you see your own name...

Give Ian the sexy characteristic of chest hair -- just enough for his sister to stroke ever so lovingly.

Made me so wet! I hope she gets pregnant ;)

Very well Written, Nicely done... can't wait for more...

Well written and realistic

So, is Em now prego or not? Will we hear more of the story of Em and Ian? And is Em short for Emily, Emma, or something else? Nice touch, Em getting off from the vibrations of the washer, setting her up for Ian's attentions.

hopefully you will keep writing and post them ASAP

only thing would of liked is a bit more of a back story,(not just parents died,aunt got us apartment)

Fantastic! The writing is superb.

Keep it up young lady.

this was a really good story, there could have been more detail and I hope to read more from u, I really hope u write more stories and I m sure they will be better and hotter as u write them, thank u

You have the potential to be a great writer. Keep

writing.

I agree with the comment above. =)

u are good