All Comments on 'Laura the Canvas Pt. 01'

to entice a lot of readers here, but I'm interested to see where this goes. I'm fine with not showing skin in this first installment, but I'd like to get more of Laura's psychology to understand better why she made this choice and if it meets her needs or goes places she didn't intend.

Thanks for the feedback! The second chapter has been submitted but I can definitely delve into it more in the third installment.

I want to see what happens next!

I'm a bit nervous about how far this will go, but you gave me hooked. I appreciate you posting this in noncon even though it is consensual noncon. You moved the next chapter to fetish, which sounds like a good fit, instead of bdsm. Good. Off to read that. If future chapters switch categories you might want to mention where past a future ones can be found. The more you make it easy for us lazy pornsters, the easier it will be to build a following.

Well introduced. The writing is great with no obvious grammatical errors, & great imaging. I’m off to read chapter 2