All Comments on 'Laura's Cardinal Ch. 01'

I've only one small minor complaint. I can't give your story seven which it deserves. Seriously, great story. I'm waiting to see where you take us next.

Great beginning!

5

A beautifully told story of love, loss, and recovery. Well done.

Praying for Steve to find what he's looking for. Nice beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter

Gut wrenching to say the least. Great beginning. 5stars

Fantastic. I’m reading this at our cabin in the forest at 8:00 AM while my soulmate of 69 years and wife of 62 years fixes our breakfast and I can’t help but be grateful for our lives together. Out the window I see two Eagle’s nests, four inches of new snow, and two male cardinals. Your story is so touching, so beautiful, and so well told. Yes, I’ll share it with my sweetheart, my partner, my lover. Thank you. Easy, 5 stars.

Powerful writing. Perhaps a little too heavy on the song lyrics, despite my love for the Moody Blues music - LOL! 4.8*

Oh my God. Powerful. Gut wrenching. … Tears.. Kind of what I know would happen if I lost my soulmate and loveof my life…or she hers.

5 stars… more if it were possible.

Terrific story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

One minor quibble - Celine Dion may have done a great cover version of The Power of Love, but it's not her song. The original is by the one and only Jennifer Rush, and was released in 1984.

Phew. In tears here. Proper gut punch. Well done. Five stars and then some. Love this.