All Comments on 'Laura's Expanding Horizons Ch. 01'

by scirocco69

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devtekdevtekover 3 years ago

I am really happy to have found here on Literotica an Italian author, moreover Sicilian, like me, capable of writing really intriguing stories.

I really enjoyed the work you did to let us know the thoughts and emotions of Giulio and Laura.

I have also written stories, but I am unable to write in good English, although I can read it perfectly. Now I'm helping myself with Google Translate, but it can't be done for a full story.

Unfortunately the sites of erotic literature in Italian are really poor for the average quality of the stories, far from the levels of Literotica.

Your story, on the other hand, is really great, keep it up. I can't wait to know what happens between Laura, Giulio and Marco.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This leads only one place

Divorce Court.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Much to verbose and convoluted, I couldn’t finish it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Anonymous doesn’t always mean asshole.

Well written story. I look forward to more. You know how to build up the anticipation

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great buildup

This is a great first work and intro, can’t wait to read the rest of the story. Well done. 5*

InfosaugerInfosaugerover 3 years ago

Well this story obviosly is written by a conservative American.

In central europe its common to sit in a saune completely nude with men and women. I've seen hundreds of naked women and men of all ages from about 16 (legal age in Austria for nude areas in wellness areas) to the age of 80 or more. I've been sitting in whirlpools and normal pools in wellness areas with naked people I didn't know. When having a massage I normaly wear a one way string tanga for men.

scirocco69scirocco69over 3 years agoAuthor

Dear Infosauger, I am sorry, but you are wrong. In Central Europe (Austria, Germany, etc.) it is common to sit in a sauna completely nude, but it is not like that in the whole Europe. In Italy it is forbidden almost everywhere, with the exception of Sud Tirol, the very northern part of Italy (Bolzano, Merano...) where the usual spoken language is German and not Italian.

So I am not American, as it is written I am Italian.

patilliepatillieabout 3 years ago
Nice start

great insight into the woman's thoughts and buillding arousal. Maybe a little wordy as well, but good beginning.

GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppyabout 3 years ago

Excellent!

Awaiting the fifth installment.

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