All Comments on 'Laura's Interracial Fantasy'

The basics of a good story are there. My suggestion would be a little more character development. Show a bit more interaction between the husband and wife to show her discontent. Also a proof read to correct numerous words left out and misspellings. Try a sequel to this one.

Good start, but the poor spelling, bad use of grammar broke up the flow of the story, like bumps in a road. You'd hit one, get through it, get started and then hit another.A good copy editor would help

Good story. Please write more!

Thanks for your advice. I agree, the grammar does need improved.

So much fun, too bad husband isn’t more into it. Maybe in next chapter xoxoxoxox Annette

Great hot short story, I could care less about the typo's, made me wet and that's why I read this (random spin) story. I felt the same way about "missing something" when I got divorced four years ago, single at 48, I figured great, now let''s do it honey and then Covid came along. My sex life was bland but better when I was married! Then I got laid, actually fucked, really fucked hard by this one jackhammer, then one fellow a lot and then another guy a friend set me up with, he had a long cock. Ok, now I'm 52 and really only want younger men and damn them if I don't cum. Not many black men living near me but perhaps on a trip, I'd love to send my ex a picture of me holding a nice big black cock. Let's do it.