All Comments on 'Laurel Creek Journal'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
great writing

"The nipples poked out like the noses of puppies through a fence."

marvelous!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story!

As a fellow fly fisherman, I really enjoyed this story. Unlike some of the commercials depicting angling on tv, I could tell by your writing that you have actually fly fished. Oh yea, the sex scenes were great too.

sotarosotaroalmost 4 years ago

I appreciated the story as much as the sex scenes. I really enjoyed the fly casting descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Story

Likely one of the best written stories here.

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusabout 3 years ago

I enjoyed your story and your thoughts on Flyfishing! Thaks

PrfsrPrfsrover 2 years ago

Excellent! An epilogue or at least more than a hint of what the future brought is warranted - please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story has it all: atmosphere, excellent plot, great characters, romance, all rolled into one. The only flaw in this story is its brevity. Five stars.

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50 something guy who likes to read erotica, decided to try and write some. Just some fantasies, maybe inspired by memories. I love panties, and everything that lies underneath them.