All Comments on 'Laurel's Story Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Perfect! What a lucky girl.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hey, the first chapter is great with Laurel giving the reader good insight into what’s going through her head. Looking forward to seeing what/how she turned into what she is today.

Steve

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

Perfection. Please write more.

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