All Comments on 'Lauren in Mexico Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome..

I want more soon please :)

angelfeathersangelfeathersover 11 years ago
Hot

Loved it. Chapter 3 please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

You just started the journey so please end it. It is very frustrating to have a story that has a time limit for a character to read that there is no real end. Please finish the 3 days with Lauren doing all kinds of things with the men (and women) at the jail. There are so many threads that can be followed until the time Lauren is freed. Gloryholes, gangbangs, sucking women, urinals, all kinds of things can happen that Lauren is finally let out of her hell. Maybe she even finds out that she is a painslut and loves being hung up and beaten. Maybe she starts (or joins) a BDSM club in England when she gets back. Maybe the police just send her to a brothel for a few years. Please continue the story.

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