All Comments on 'Lauren's Awakening'

Excellent story. Very descriptive in the sex scenes and the characters. 5*

One side note - not to be the grammar police, but you might want to have someone proof read your stories before submission. A few times I had to read thru twice to get the meaning of a sentence. It somewhat takes away from the flow when you have to do that. That said it was well written and hot.

Great read! This is another great story by SDS who never disappoints. Way to go!

Tina

This story wasn't very true to the Incest category until a little at the end. Perhaps other category would have fit better. Still, a good read.

Hot as hell. Hopefully theres more to come.

You didn't get around to her dad fucking her, the girl/girl sex was so hot, I loved it!

For the record there anonymous (no, the other one), I thought I had posted it under 'Lesbian Sex' - which seemed more fitting....although I did tag it (as evidenced) as a story with incest.

Who knows? :)

This story was so full of hot sex, I loved it! Lauren's sexual awakening and the girl on girl action - what can I say! Thank the gods that I 'follow' sds195 ;-)

Definitely need more! Such a great story! I loved it! But needs Lauren's dad in the next one 👌🏼

That was one hot story, great reading consider a sequel to the story.

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That was great. Your heroine was a lot of fun, sexy hot times which required some real zest for life, and she was smart. Can’t beat that. A story this good deserves a sequel, to properly deal with Dave, the chess team, her father and Kim’s situation. I’d love to read more.

Definitely need more!

Lots more of Lauren's awakening!

TotaLly depraved but I loved 🥰

Bill S.

Not just hot, but super hot.

Well written also without annoying pesky grammar mistakes.

A sequel would be Very well received!

Bill

So when does Lauren’s dad fuck his daughter?

Good story 😉👍