All Comments on 'Lauren's Awakening'

So when does Lauren’s dad fuck his daughter?

Good story 😉👍

Not just hot, but super hot.

Well written also without annoying pesky grammar mistakes.

A sequel would be Very well received!

Bill

TotaLly depraved but I loved 🥰

Bill S.

Definitely need more!

Lots more of Lauren's awakening!

That was great. Your heroine was a lot of fun, sexy hot times which required some real zest for life, and she was smart. Can’t beat that. A story this good deserves a sequel, to properly deal with Dave, the chess team, her father and Kim’s situation. I’d love to read more.

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wow

That was one hot story, great reading consider a sequel to the story.

Definitely need more! Such a great story! I loved it! But needs Lauren's dad in the next one 👌🏼

This story was so full of hot sex, I loved it! Lauren's sexual awakening and the girl on girl action - what can I say! Thank the gods that I 'follow' sds195 ;-)

For the record there anonymous (no, the other one), I thought I had posted it under 'Lesbian Sex' - which seemed more fitting....although I did tag it (as evidenced) as a story with incest.

Who knows? :)

You didn't get around to her dad fucking her, the girl/girl sex was so hot, I loved it!

Hot as hell. Hopefully theres more to come.

This story wasn't very true to the Incest category until a little at the end. Perhaps other category would have fit better. Still, a good read.

Great read! This is another great story by SDS who never disappoints. Way to go!

Tina

Excellent story. Very descriptive in the sex scenes and the characters. 5*

One side note - not to be the grammar police, but you might want to have someone proof read your stories before submission. A few times I had to read thru twice to get the meaning of a sentence. It somewhat takes away from the flow when you have to do that. That said it was well written and hot.