Law of the Heart - My Alt. Ending

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It was said to me that when Juan got back from Boston he finally saw the note about being next, he just laughed and tossed it. One week later he got a box in the mail with two shriveled up testicles in it. Even at his young age he suffered a stroke and heart attack at the same time. The stroke paralyzed him from the waist down, he could never get a hard on again. The Mendozas closed their law firm after that.

Susan caught an incurable STD and died a year later.

I had my month with Sharon and enjoyed making Jill take care of us. At the end of the month Sharon wished us a happy future, gave Jill a wet kiss and squeezed her ass. I called Bill and told him after a lot of thinking I never wanted to see him again. I asked him a simple question if it had been your wife that the Mendozas were playing with and I was watching and did nothing, how would he feel?

I hadn't had sex with Jill for three months and she tested positive for syphilis and was two and a half months pregnant. She took the treatments and got an abortion. I framed the results and the bills and hung them over our bed to remind Jill every day of the costs of bad decisions.

It's been ten years since that happened, and everything has been the way it should be. We got a notice about our twenty-year reunion to be held in Miami again. I wonder if Jill wants to go.

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AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Let me see if I understand this correctly - he stayed with the slut? Not just no, but hell no.

OOAAOOAA5 months ago

Good story! A divorce should have been in place too though...

phill1cphill1c7 months ago

Why on god's earth would either of these people want to be around each other? It just seems very juvenile...she fucked so much. She fucked after someone lost their testicles and a boat accident She fucked both of them. Why would she come back to this loser when she is a practicing attorney making $$?

It just seems ridiculous!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You still went for raac

usaretusaretabout 1 year ago

Too quick, trying to neatly tie up every little thing. Not the worst effort, but definitely not close to best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dragonfruitman69…. That would be better seeing the stupid story u wrote with no logic or sense!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was a crazy version. Jill was a cheater but not a wanton slut. And somehow Hector getting his balls snipped is a cavalier throwaway.

underdog1underdog1over 1 year ago

Sorry bro, but I can't understand any man staying with a woman after testing positive with the clap and being knocked up with anothers kid, It would be hard, but it's entirely posibe to forgive an indescretion, but a pregnancy and an STD, nah, the guy would have to be real loser to overlook all that.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Not bad, but l’d have ditched her, or worse.

No way was she worth saving

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I agree with the rest, you rushed the ending. Shame. 2 star.

JonDoe315JonDoe315over 2 years ago

Seems like u gave up at the end and just started to ramble on with very lil details..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why the fuck did he stay with her?

BSreaderBSreaderover 2 years ago
Second read

Better than some of the rest.

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

The reconciliation does not logically flow from the rest of the story. The wife is a hard core sociopathic selfish slut who displays utter contempt for the cuckolded husband. This is admitted by said strumpet in conversation with said cuckold. Then after the rather extensive BTB revenge against Sally, the twins et Al; we find said cuckold cravenly forgiving all and welcoming the sociopathic bitch back with open arms. All this and not once does she apologize for her betrayal. She is sorry she got caught but you can see that her underlying sociopathic core will cause her to repeatedly betray him again once everything cools down and similar triggering circumstances reoccur.

Thus this otherwise well crafted tale falls into illogical shreds. Next time spend a little more effort tying the whole thing together before trying to shoehorn a non sequeter ending

Sorry 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

With her screwing around in Florida and then in Boston no way does she come back. 2 stars**

Freudzslip69Freudzslip69almost 3 years ago

Very poorly done and almost totally unbelievable.

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