All Comments on 'Lawn Service Ch. 02'

Thanks for your story. May you have many adventures and continue to write about them.

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

PS The fantastic applies equally well to the photo, wow!!

I rated it as "5 globs"!

Please write more.

this was awesome i remember my friends and i set his wife up with a monster cock she loved it