All Comments on 'Laying the Orc Ch. 03'

Very enjoyable read, that is well thought out and full of details. Very much looking forward to more so we can see where this story would go. How we don't have to wait long.

I wasn't expecting pt 3, but I'm glad ya did it.

Also that poor man just wants to be happy.

Love this story! Hope we get more!

So a great read would love more

Absolutely horrendous twist. Minus 5 stars if I could.

This series could work really well as a full novel, maybe even a trilogy. Strong John Carter of Mars vibes. Probably my favorite on literotica.

That was the greatest pillow talk I've ever read. Mission accomplished/10.

Enjoyed the full involvement of all the main characters. A conclusion with pregnancies all around as a fourth chapter would be nice.