by JukeboxEMCSA
That was so fucking hot I need to change my neighbors panties. Wow, when you decide to write a scene, you really know what you are doing.
You are simply the commander of the short form story. You are in complete control of the pace and rhythm. You are never rushed to get to the end and never offer more than you should. No bowing to the whims of the audience. Very few sequels. All I can say is bravo!