All Comments on 'Lean on Me'

This story was really great! Cannot wait to read the next installment! I think it would be really hot if somewhere down the line one, some, or all of the girls wanted to get pregnant by Jeremy.

Can't wait!!!!!

I loved the story. I just wished the dad wasn't such a spineless douche bag. Hopefully he'll get his revenge on Helen in chapter two.

what a great story line. there is intrigue, a couple of plot twists, and GREAT sex. what else is there!! can't wait for the next chapter

his backlog of stories.

Glad he is back to writing - will give all of us much pleasure.

And wondering why the blokes girlfriend went unidentified. Weird. There is absolutely no reason a PI worth even half what they are paid that would not be able to identify someone given she works in the hospital and is out in pubic with the hubbie. Surely at some time shs would have driven a car with license plates, or the pair bonked at her place. Thus PI not trustworthy and prob got paid off.

Things become a bit obvious unfortunately. I am only at the point of son getting home.

Now for my second guess as to who the mystery woman is... no second prize I am afraid.

Not even incest can keep me going...oh I guess...no enough of my bs for now.

I loved and enjoyed this story very much. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

You wove your characters very well. It made for interesting reading. I am an avid reader. Whether it is erotica or some other form of literature being able to invent believable characters and move them in and out is a skill. In my humble opinion you have that skill. You can spell and use grammar well also.

But lost complete interest when this became one big orgy fuckfest. Every person just wants to fuck everyone else and has zero live in this story. One star porno script.

Well, looks like another unfinished story. Too bad, in a way. Too much a lesbian festival for my tastes.