All Comments on 'Learning from Older Men Pt. 01'

by letsplayhard1994

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

Oh that was a good read. You left me hanging. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
One glaring inconsistency

Early on you wrote, "but as time went on I came to realise that as much as I was attracted to some women I was also attracted to some men."

Then just a few paragraphs later you wrote, "I'd never considered myself gay or even bi, I genuinely hadn't found another man attractive before that night".

That's kind of a jarring inconsistency that I found disruptive to the narrative. Otherwise I found the premise somewhat interesting and I do think you did a pretty good job of editing yourself in terms of spelling and grammar.

63lsmith63lsmithabout 4 years ago
FAIR

Not bad, but we need to hear about this history teacher.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 4 years ago
Ace

The moment you started falling into a world of sex on the brain was how my teenage brain responded. I couldn't ( and still can't) get enough!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed it and bought back my early days. Really excellent. Thanks

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