by monkeykinglives
I don't know how to put in a footnote. Thanks to Wikipedia for the passage on the Spanish Inquisition.
Enjoy the story.
Really enjoyed the historical detail and local color. It is interesting to read about the dom’s inner world. Raises the question of who is really in charge in these sorts of relationships! - particularly if the dom is not a sadist at heart, but leans into the role to please his partner.
The previous chapter was a list, and this one is a too brief travelogue with a sex scene. Your first two chapters showed much more promise than this.
Trying to relate a real experience makes it a challenge on the drama, what to leave in, and what to leave out. Open to suggestions.