All Comments on 'Learning Slave Psychology Pt. 02'

Excellent, I anxiously await part 3 of the story.

I am only wondering if slave psychologists only deal with slaves' psychological issues or if they also have the power to legally (and involuntarily) declare someone a slave when the person in question has a "slave psyche"? Similar to how people can be declared legally insane in the real world.

Interesting question, Anonymous. Personally, I was wondering if the slave psychologist was empowered to declare someone mentally (and legally) unfit to own slaves.

New Paragraph at: My contact with these unfortunates only reinforced my desire to help them. There was a

Perhaps a comment on what drove them into slavery is in order. How many were criminals (for term or life) vs. there for debt (For term or life) vs. how many had chosen it unwisely or correctly?

New Paragraph at: "When I was indentured for college loan debt at age 22, I was graded as "Standard,"

How much collage loan debt I ask, and does that affect how long the indenture is for? Is there a scale of payment?

Also are you using the USDA Beef standard grades as a guide? Good choice if you are, but say so, it’ll help.

At some point some place a list of grades, and what gets you into them is needed. I take this from: "When I was indentured for college loan debt at age 22, I was graded as "Standard," which is two below Choice,

Second pass: I think a new sentence is in order at: I was sold as a general labourer. And I was lucky enough to be bought at auction by a wealthy widower.

New Paragarph at: “That apron protected me while cooking but still left my butt hanging out. A few times he took me with him to get groceries, leading me around naked with my hands cuffed in front of me,

It’s almost a new paragraph, but I think a few words got cut that shouldn’t have at: openings. It was the best night of my life. Then he manumitted me and handed me a check that p

No new paragraph at: nothing serious but the sex is fantastic!" That story made me much more hopeful about my ow

The new paragraph begins with speech (I’m biased that way) at: "My point, sweetie, is I had a happy outcome because I was ugly with a low sales price. But you, girl, are a little hottie who will sell for much more and probably get a hard ride from

I love ‘Sweetie’ it makes the speech wonderful.

New Paragraph at: "At least it will give you something to talk about in psychoanalysis!" joked my psychiatrist mom

New Paragraph at: An MD self-indenture would attract too much attention and too many questions. Yet, I still had

I note she waited until after her MD was done before self indenturing. Nice bit of hand-waving on her part.

I’m really critical about time in my stories, and given Texas weather issues in Summer (Winter in Canada) when she self indentures should be clear up front (you use it well at the back end but really you should show: In the How Mnay? months between medical school and my date of surrender, I worked hard to prepare for the ordeal

We will presume an April end to Med School.

I’m not a fan of brackets in fiction. So I pulled (My cheerleading buddy Wendy was in the same class, and held my clothes for me after I stripped in the restroom). The comments I heard were embarrassing but the experie… out and started a new paragraph with it.

I cut them rather than do the font fix on these. Sorry.

New Paragraph at: The latter included happiness, submissiveness, lust, eagerness, and so on. I particularly

To your note: . No resistance, no hesitation, no sign of ego that might bring undue attention or punishment my way . If I

You need to answer for yourself a key question, I know a lot of my sex slaves to be are frantic about.

Will Nikki cum while being flagellated. If so then she is NOT a Beige Slave, and doesn’t wear a light brown harness. OTOH punishment is chastity and in the environment of my stories (with 40 mg of Cealis [Both for males, and the female equivalent that is now available but not as specific as Cealis], 10 mg of Rogaine and sex, sex, sex everywhere the hard on is more than painful, so is the frustration

Your comment: I cut my long blond hair to chin length is and is not a problem in my stories.

It is strongly desired that when new Slaves report to a Great House of Bondage (Which are where I set my stories) they have very long hair. Minimum length is that of a thread run along the top of the penus, then along the bottom.

For girls it is the residual length of a thread around the tits, less the length under them.

When a slave is ‘growing out at the great house’ (They’ve sired or whelped a child) the measure includes the length under the balls, and around the lactating tits.

Normally a slave has NO HAIR AT ALL, making them profoundly SLAVE NAKED which is a term I am stealing from you. Good writing there!

New Paragraph at: With Wendy's help, I trimmed my blond pubes back to nothing and waxed my legs, arms, and back.

I note you don’t wax them away.

You have: etonogestrol rod implanted to suppress my menstrual cycle

The girls in my stories are IUD fans, but as an author I did look up etonogestrol. This is OK for your story since it’s for three years, but do regular sex slaves in this world get to keep their IUD’s.

One of the issues is that one of the ways professional doms make money out of girl slaves it by whelping them and receiving a payment from either the state adoption agency, the girls relatives, or the fathers relatives when the HEALTHY baby is delivered. This assumes a minimum one year indenture and that the girl is NOT on the Pill or has an etonogestrol stick in her.

An unhealthy baby due to alchahol or drug use extends the indenture and gets tubes tied.

Your note: buttload (ouch) of broad-spectrum antibiotics is excellent, given the time / date I expect this to occur I’d have written in Vaccinations for HIV, Hepitices A through D, HPV, and a long list of others. This will also allow discussion of how the Anti-vaxers reacted to slaves getting all those shots

I very much like your: for a hidden implant in my breast that could be activated by remote signal to locate me if I were kidnapped or held beyond my release date.

I will point to Spanked Nakeds & Schlank’s stories about the Vineyard in their Scott Anderson & Cheryl’s Passion stories. See

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2928628&page=submissions https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=852283&page=submissions

Thank you, I missed the ides of September in my first pass read / edit! The fatal date, the ides of September, finally came. I dressed in a very modest, loose sweater and drab ankle-length dress, but with no jewellery, makeup, or underwear to slow up the stripping process.

Also caught the missing le in jewellery.

I don’t like brackets in fiction so: petition, Ma'am; I'm sure it was a lot of work for you." (I had no such belief but wanted to butter her up.)

I do like you spellings. In a manuscript there’d be underlines to stay the copy editor’s hand:"Waal, Judge Parker looked at your pitturs," she snickered

They wouldn’t show up here since this is the Copy Edited work

Yes, you’re getting a mild accent carried nicely with: were genuine, and all I could think to say was "Yes'm" again. She showed me the court order,

In my Alpha Reader’s story they’re speaking Waterford English so he did this:“HE is dead because da Six Clubs sAys so,” Walking Tyson says. “HE duone guone and tuook one of da Chairman’s cousins oout of da hoOd. Worse hE rEfuse Einitiation and rEfused public and feorever to join da Six Clubs because hE is duone guone and joined da Scouts.”

The black letters are voiced, the red are not but support the reader. He won Honorable Mention for that one

Again my note on brackets, and you used square ones this time at: "Wall, bless your l'il heart." [There it was, the ultimate Southern expression that is best translated as:

" ‘You need a keeper. You're too dumb to be wandering around loose.’ " Well, in about three minutes she would be my keeper.]

However the ‘translation’ is profoundly valuable giving a non-Dixi reader context. It is however surrounded by apostriphys not quote marks.

I’d put in an ‘I’ at: "Yes'm." I Keep up the submissive act, I thought to myself; she seems in a good mood now

On second pass I realized Ms. Bundy wouldn’t need to set up a video camera, Nikki’s not the only person being indentured today, several dozen debtors will be as well so it’ll be pertinently in place at: She set up pointed to a video camera to record my self-indenture and called in two of her subordinates, Enus and Rosa, as witnesses.

I don’t think the comma at: indenture,; for a period of 180 days, is right. I’ve put in a semi-colan, but talk to a better grammarian than me about it.

This is interesting, and seriously under done. If you agree to be an alpha reader I’ll send you the first book to the end of my hero’s first giving his oath of submission, which is clearly the right one for this service (Limited time frame).

Second pass I notice machine: My alpha reader has a Sealer for the State of Texas (He has his Texas PE). So the machine is over kill, but it’ll work at: my indenture document through a machine to imprint the Texas Star on it. Then she grinned at

Second Pass, Kill the brackets at: "Yes, Mistress." (Thank heavens I remembered to change the salutation—no sense getting punished in my first minute as a slave.) Rosa stepped forward.

Second pass I’d add a my at: band-aid, the quicker I stripped, the quicker I could get over the first of my many humiliations. I

Second Pass you can cut two ands by: and my flip-flops up and gave giving all three objects to him. No sense delaying the inevitable. I stood as straight as I could, spread my legs slightly, and interlaced interlacing my fingers behind

Second pass: This is an action scene so short sentences are in order (That is hard for some folks to do, you’re not there, but close) So I’d break in two killing an ‘and’ in the process at: I think the three government employees were used to people who hesitated, and They were further

Second Pass: I use a permiant collar with a cell phone connection in it (allowing limited data transfer. For the Video to transfer it needs an induction connection – for the data volume) The court can ‘ping’ it and get video for a while (48 Hours after the fact) the slave can touch a button and ‘make perminant’ the video so it’ll stay until removed by their owner.

This is not that advanced a technology, not even that the collar is good to 200 meters of ocean. The depth test is a pain in the ass, but really useful. It does however mandate induction not direct charging.

Second Pass: You can cut an ‘and’, something useful if you’re running long on words – which isn’t a consideration for Litrotica but for a traditional publisher it is. You can do this at: Having practiced this procedure with Wendy, I immediately dropped my hair and crossed crossing my wrists behind my back.

I like this detail. Not clear on why but my Doms at BCR are heavy into left right symbolisim.

realizing that she had slipped by giving any information, the supervisor sent me on my way with a sharp slap on my left buttock. At least I knew where I was going, even though "Big D Market"

I find your comment: Among the observers were a number of older women who seemed to hate me. Again, Professor Walker had warned me that some women liked to feel better about themselves by: of some interest, mind where I’m writing I don’t have but one ‘older’ lady – and she’s young enough she gets pregnant in the series.

I like the word Trollop, lends tone to a story like this. OTOH you’ve got brackets again at:even trollop. There (must be an older Englishwoman in the group, I thought. Then my racing mind suddenly imagined co-authoring a journal article with my Dad, perhaps in the Journal of Slave Sociology: "Correlation of social background of free women and their perceptions of female slaves." Ha.) This is an interesting note. Mind your world anybody can become a slave, all it takes is a little bad luck, or less than perfect judgement.

This line suggests that a lot of the females being enslaved aren’t young or sexy, but middle aged with a history, and likely due to bebt. I feel like you see it but don’t reflect it. I’d almost put a lady from XYZ bank with a debtor – a milf or even a granny.

New Paragraph at: She paused to get a drink of water, leaving me motionless long enough for the more

Cut the beginning of the paragraph at: As I said, I had anticipated emotions of exposure, defenselessness, and mortification.

New Paragraph at: When I thought about it later, I realized that the office employees' perception of me only reinforced the sudden change in my reality

This goes very well with my Alpha’s comment in one of his stories where a significant minority of those taken in slavery do not live long enough to get castrated (this doesn’t help the slave market but there’ve been issues:

Kill the and at: "No, Mistress. I'm just a stupid naked toy." And At that moment, having put myself in Durance Vile and real peril.

I’m of the opinion that you use an apostrophy not a quote to denote a special word like ‘slave grin’. Also you can make two sentences in the action scene at: my blonde hair. and Forcing my mouth and cheeks into the infamous " ‘slave grin’ "". The gag tasted terrible.

It sounds reasonable since the cum on it is god knows how old.

This is an action scene so short paragraphs are in order. I’d put in two new ones at:

He slammed the cage shut and hung a tiny lock on the hasp.

Like a valuable show dog—or maybe a wayward puppy—I was stuck on my knees, collared