All Comments on 'Learning Slave Psychology Pt. 03'

I like them even more then the "sandy foot girl" from where it derives, because I am a wimp and prefere reluctance above force any day of the week.

The only thing is that the chapters are relativly short + have always a somewhat long introduction wich make the "juicy" part even shorter. I can understand why you probably do it... it's good for the motivation to publish frequently but maybe you could install a minimum of x words of "new story" before publishing. Just a thought.

I stll gave 5* because even short I loved every word. But I can garantee if every installment will get the 5* if they stay this short.

What you’ve written is (unfortunately) realistic and plausible, more than that it has a bucket load more going for it in terms of empathy. In a universe where any adult can be sold into slavery as labour or as a sex toy it’s a concept that to me is horrific to think about. In the real world as an abstract concept/ a fantasy sexual slavery is erotic it’s why people write about it and why even more read about it.

Sexual slavery should be consensual between trusting individuals and not open to the kind of abuse that exists right now in the real world in terms of Human Trafficking. Rightly or wrongly in fantasy or reality sex sells. It’s these two concepts standing next to each other that makes it difficult for me to read fantasy stories about sexual slavery. To a lot of people my response is going to be seen as an overreaction, maybe it is . My own life experiences make it difficult for me to accept the cavalier attitude of seeing people as subhuman that’s usually portrayed in this genre. Instead of that you’ve humanised it. Well done.

To: teehaa

“because I am a wimp and prefere reluctance above force any day of the week.”

Hell no ! That doesn’t make you a wimp it makes you a well adjusted human being. The “rape fantasy” is erotic BUT actual real rape isn’t. The first is similar to a BDSM relationship/ scene because it’s role playing including trust, limits and after care whereas rape is a crime an absolute violation by either someone you know or a stranger. Nobody has the right to demand sex from you. I’m more than happy to stick with the fantasy approach.

I too prefer reluctance over non consent, any arsehole who tries to force me against my will is going to find out that I won’t submit against my will, regardless of the cost to myself. It’s probably why I couldn’t write an abduction slavery type story because if I were in that situation with no possible way out I’d rather kill myself. That approach isn’t exactly material for an erotic story.

Tess (UK)

I'm aware that some readers would prefer fewer and longer segments of this story, in order to avoid recapitulation. If you'd rather not read recaps each time, imagine trying to write different recaps for so many episodes! I have broken this story into segments at what I think are distinct scenes. Several of the subsequent parts (there are a total of 9, and Nikki may reappear in another story sometime) are longer, so please bear with me. The story goes well beyond the Big D Slave Market to encompass highs and lows of her entire six months' journey. Thanks for reading.

Might be my favourite story ever on here!

I really appreciated the great job you did on expanding The Big D, as well as the shoutout to Sarah and the other characters. WELL DONE, and thank you!

Professor Hollister asked me to send you the following message:

Dear Carl,

Please let the University know that there is a market mechanism that would allow you to sell someone in slavery and then retrieve them. As slaves are a commodity, there are futures contract for Slave Pussy.

For example, If you wanted to resell Nicki today, you could buy an option for January 2021 Grade A Slave Pussy on the Kansas City Board of Trade, and purchase her back on whatever the market price is then. That way you could buy Niki back in 6 months at whatever the market price is in January. Thus hedging Nicki's pussy is no different than hedging oil or pork bellies, although in Nicki's case "the spread" might prove quite a bit more enjoyable.

Of course slave girls aren't entirely fungible, so they might consider a cheap insurance contract, where the insurer would be willing to pay up 2.5 times the girls market value if the seller is being obstinate. This would cover any premium the University might have to pay to sweeten the deal, and offer a premium to buy her back on the open market. Usually such premiums are rarely necessary, and if they are, they are small, so the insurance itself is quite reasonable.

Of course it is free market, and there is always a chance that the buyer might not be able or willing to sell, because of assets going through bankruptcy, or a buyer's particular fondness for the girl. These delays are usually rare, and in any event not particularly lengthy, as in most cases the lure of money and the tantalizing possibility of hotter slave pussy is almost always sufficient inducement.

If the premium requested seems unreasonable, the insurance company may request the buyer to put the item back on the open market, forcing little Nicki to once again spread her legs and show off her bunghole so that her true value can be determined, right down to the penny.

Of course, no system is full proof, but in this case any bugs actually features. As you wish your students to experience "real" slavery, an actual sale with no end date, coupled with a master who has total and absolute ownership, will provide girls like Nicki with much more authentic experience. Indeed, the thought of the option expiring before it can be used, or some technical glitch with the insurance, will keep little Nicki's slave pussy wet for the whole 6 months, or for however long the fates allow.

Professionally Yours,

Sarah Hollister, PhD.

Nikki, as a candidate for a degree in Psychiatry has neither a beard nor a german accent. In a dystopian future, where slavery is legal, our candidate is a woman from a good family. With the profitability of the peculiar institution, slave psychiatry could be a lucrative field for her. But money is not Nikki's lure. She has been interested in slavery since an early age.

The catch is that the candidate must follow Lincoln's advice to slavers: take it up for a while, an indenture of not less than six months of reduction to servitude. Her mentor Doctor Sarah Hollister advises against it. Enslaved to pay off her own loan, Dr Hollister had been lucky. A less than prime she was bound to a kindly master who manumitted her. As a voluntary slave of prime grade Nikki , is stripped, collared, caged and sold at auction. .

Learning Shave Psychology is part of a future dystopia which Carl_Bradford builds upon previous writings of Mariner and Joe Doe. An important part of Joe's writings is the concept of status and identification. Stripped bare the individual loses status and identity. Carl's approach is geared more to the excitement of subordination, certainly a concept we encounter in daily life.Some lead; some follow.

There has been some criticism of a dystopia founded on slavery. Certainly the US civil war and the expansion of the British Empire to 2/5ths of the world surface before its collapse purported to abolish slavery. Could it come back in a cherry coated form?

I’m not 100% with your comment at the beinging of the chapter vis. Not needing to pee at: I'd be peeing myself. Frnakly a lot of slaves at that point’ll pee themselves or their cages. It’s fear and that’s about all it takes. Nikki is showing amazing self control in a ‘combat’ class situation.

Clearly there’s not clothing, so many slave’ll piss where the need takes them. Still pissing in this situation is not a good thing to do. She may need the liquid for sweat. That truck in Texas in mid September can get damn hot!

Much to do in this paragraph: First cut the nickel words at the beginning of sentences as shown. You do give the location that Nikki is from in that it’s the Captial of Texas (Austin). I knew This would be a life-altering event. and Several people had tried to talk me out of it. But I was so committed to my future profession that earlier that day I had signed my freedom away at the capital office of the Texas Department of Agriculture's Livestock and Slave Division.

New Paragraph at: Once I was legally a slave, I had no choice but to submit—stripped completely naked,

New Paragraph at: Slavery was completely different—I had no privileges or freedom.

Good note at: hard tray that formed the bottom of a large dog cage, which cage was in the non-air-conditioned back of a truck hurtling down a Texas highway.

This is a critical concern, and even in September potentially leathal.

New Paragraph at: I had a cheerleader's face, (blue eyes, high cheekbones, and a nose usually described as cute), hair (blonde), and body (35C-24-34; I'm not bragging, my appearance is relevant to my,

Also kill a bunch of brackets.

You’ve shown later in the story that part of her problem comes from: At the moment, however, this body that had earned me a full college scholarship and

In future a small student loan in default will stear things the right way, and look ‘normal’, not showing that the fix is in. It’ will also help the guys, and that would be an interesting story (espessualy if he’s rated ‘Prime’).

Hold two words, add my and new paragraph at:medical doctorate before I turned my current age, 24. But that

My mind had no solutions to my situation. If anything, my mind only made things worse.

New Paragraph at; How the HELL had I deliberately put myself in this situation?

You should avoid And at the beginning of paragraphs as at: And I knew that worse was to come. My faculty mentor, Professor Walker, had tried to

I think New Paragraph at: Six years ago, when I turned 18 and the other cheerleaders pressured me into

But I’m not 100% on it.

Your discussion of Nikki’s expereance of erotic stimulation by her situation at the Slave Grading in: volunteering for slave grading, the combination of my body. and My helpless excitement at the slave market had made me "slave hot," as recorded in the National Slave Registry by graphic

Is good. It shows her submissive nature. In a future writing have a girl or a guy do this but they’re seriously dominant and find it totally – as you write it. I look forward to reading it. That will also allow you to discuss how that situation affects males, and older females (MILFs and Grannies). An exploration of a granny, someone in her sixties or seventies, going into slavery would be interesting, and a valid writing challenge.

I would split this compound sentence into two.

In my fiction by 2080 there are really good drugs to induce intense arousal in women. There are a variety of pink pills, the locally produced one the most intense – it’s got a fair dose of testosterone in it that boosts its signal, then gets bound by a slow release testosterone binder and flushed from the system via the kidneys.

The testosterone binder was developed to improve male fertility, not horniness.

Which makes the actions of Limp Dick’s associates; they’re not friends, he wanted to be but given he’s a slave for life afterward, remarkably stupid. He gets two counts of rape with extenuating circumstances, he’s under threat by the Principal Criminals, and reductions for taking care of the toxically drunk individuals, turning states eveidence and total utter rejection of what he’d done – true remorse.

They are what the Responsibility Act from my Alpha Reader’s Fiction set out to produce.

The three principals criminals get 80 years each in Huntsville (Four counts of ‘insensate rape’ of drunk girls). Before that they get to atone for three counts of attempted rape, not statutory in their case, but the intended victims were 16 at the time to their 19.

They also get to witness Limp Dicks mutilation (Loss of foreskin, installation of Septum, nipple, 3” pectoral, Prince Albert, Gauche Rings and 2 tie-bars through the cock) and Branding with the Triangle Star of Trinity State under his right arm, followed by 12 lashes with a single tailed whip wielded by Mistress Adamantine. He is then collared by Master Tom Cat, a gay garage owner – he wanted to be an auto mechanic, and he will be. His two kids – the forced birthers don’t allow abortion for rape, get the money, even if he gets the Social Security. That’s before lunch.

After lunch the Principal Criminals atone to the three underage drinkers, Car Dunker, Suzy Franklyn and Annette Hunter. They do so under the direction of Suck-You-Bus (Car Dunker’s owner for her 18-months misdemeanour conviction) before being sent, in my slave collars, to Huntsville for 80 years.

The collars are returned to East City Court House the following day. They’re about 1500 dollars in 2024$ each .

Like the Oath Keeper Leader the trial is seriously delayed, but not as much as in the Oath Keeper’s case, just a little more than a year.

I seem to recall other references to Judge Parker, I look forward to seeing this fifth class character in a second class character role someday. See: body had resulted in Judge Parker assigning me a classification of Pleasure Slut and shipping my

I looked on amazon and cattle tags are pinned not stapled: See:For example, incoming slaves had coded tags stapled pinned to their ears like cattle.

I’d put in a follow on thought in:its inventory was composed of "Sandy Foot Girls; only the finest pussy qualifies to be Sandy Foot Girls." They also had a line of prime beefcake boi, few of them gay but all of them headed that way.

You don’t need the bracket at: (Side note: ordinarily, I would object strenuously to being described as "pussy," or

Because you write Side Note:

New Paragraph at: Male slaves were often referred to as "assholes," probably because, like female slave

I would like to read the story of her nemesis’’ trip through the system (the one nailed for embezzlement).

Also the story of some guy nailed for sexual assault on a fee female (Judge Roy Bean V’s story to be precise – and he ends up in something close to what I call Fury House, where the furies on earth live, and flagellate their oath breaking slaves thrice daily.

And no closing bracket at: pride for a slave unless it's pride in giving good sex.)

I think a new paragraph and an insert at: Meanwhile, a series of steps disoriented and aroused the women, and submissive men, to new heights.

Is in order, but I’m not 100% on the paragraph. The note about submissive men is needful since about 75% of the volume at Bid D is branded male.

Thinking about the chutes I realized they’ll have a significant smell from two sources: First is girl juice from the ‘Slave Hot’ girls, but there’ll also be a great deal of piss from those girls, and guys who are absolutely terrified of what’s about to happen to them. I know this is a hard thing to grasp, and I only got it after passing by it twice in the Beta read at: By the time she or he reached the auction block, each Sandy Foot Girl would should be slave hot and sell to best advantage, marketed to an audience that saw her as a particular type of "pussy"

The market for girls you’ve covered in: such as arrogant liberal college girl, stripper slut, debtor, spend swift and so on.

The markets for boii include, auto mechanic, driver, ass hole, arrogant collage boi, male stripper, slave slut, and others. I look foreward to reading your additions to this.

My spell checker doesn’t like ‘Rumor’, it wants to put ‘rumour’ but it’s british biased.

I’m about to read the related story. I'd heard a rumor that Dr. Hollister had recently gone undercover, allowing herself to be

New Paragraph at: The dust jacket photo on her latest book showed a tall, beautiful, supremely-confident woman

Long paragraph split at: Now I realized that I myself was about to have the same experience, so I could

New Paragraph at: If Dr. Hollister really did become a Sandy Foot Girl, I guess I'll be in good company.

I’d split the sentence and add a new subject, in part because I want to bring extra attention to the point made in this bit of writing:the sensation. This was something else I had to categorize in my preparation to be a slave psychiatrist.

You’re quoting her talking to herself so it goes in italics at:effect that: if it's inevitable anyway, you might as well lie back and enjoy it?

Another long paragraph split at: My bound hands couldn't reach my trigger areas, but I found that rubbing my thighs

Use comas not brackets at: other muscles rhythmically, as if I were copulating, (hell—getting fucked,) brought me off

New Paragraph at: The second and third times took longer, but after that I was filled with endorphins and

No Brackets At: terminology such as rectum and endorphins.)

I also use endorphins and my hero’s going to be a sex slave Tool & Die Maker, so the apology’s un-necessary.

New Paragraph at: “Additionally, all Big D employees are authorized to use any means deemed necessary

New Paragaraph at: A moment later, a young guy built like a football player and wearing the Big D logo on

New Paragrahp at: A heavy collar and battery pack wrapped around my neck; I felt two sharp points—the

New person speaking so new paragaraph at: "Yes, Master" I announced as loudly as I dared while trying to remain completely motionless.

The whole of the new paragraph is italic since it’s her talking to herself at: Oh, great— in this case, her stereotype was right on the money, in that she had correctly

Split the paragraph at: Unfortunately, I had learned there was a significant portion of the male population who

See my comments above on brackets in fiction at: carried grudges because, (they believed, ) some cheerleader had been cruel to them in high

Change of idea so new paragraph at: In fact, Professor Hollister had designed a specific cheerleader ear tag, a megaphone-

Also no brackets at: number, (which turned out to be BS-4320, ) on one side

New Paragraph at: I was so distracted by that thought that I barely registered the order to return to Prone

Don’t start a paragraph anywhere with a bracket! Also the first pharase is internal conversation so in italic at: (Roll over, play dead, you're just an animal, I grumped to myself. Wait a minute. Rosa at

You’re not italicizing her thoughts. Mind getting italics may be a major pain in setting up the file but: Wait a minute. Rosa at the Department of Agriculture had collared and leashed me like a dog, but these people just tagged me like a heifer. Does that mean I'm moving up in the world? Is a thought

New Paragraph at: Wait a minute too.

I frequently have my new slave boi remember that Silence is a Slaves Friend. You write: Either one had to be done silently

My hero slave is increadably turned on by being leashed. Comment at: Bob attached another leash to my collar,

New Paragarph at: After all the embarrassments of this day, I was surprised to learn that I could still blush.

Yes she can still blush,but her mental preparation should have inured her to embarissment, At least a little that should be reflected here.

New Paragraph at:"Since you're a prime minus, I assume you know how to perform your auction block moves, right?"

This raises questions about what they do with Allan Blake, who I’m fairly sure hasn’t leaned the slave positions. How long does he have to get them sort of? And I’m sure that Ms. Williams will ask the judge to have him sold at Big D, not HCI because he’s that kind of ass hole.

Kill the brackets, and the ‘Let’s’ for: "Yes, Master." (Let's Face it, slaves never get the good lines of dialog.

No they don’t do they. That’s why there’s so much internal dialog in these stories.

Not so sure you need at new paragraph at: Once Bob told them that I had self-indentured for only six months, without any record of … but I stuck one in anyway.

New Paragraph at I happened to be facing away from whoever made the comment, so I instinctively did a move I had performed hundreds of times, (always wearing clothes, !) while in college: I leaned over backwards into a handstand facing him, then ( still inverted ) did a split, moving my legs almost parallel to the ground

Also kill the brackets. From this it is clear you’ve done gymnastics, or done significant research on Cheerleader moves.

Long paragraph again at: Already aroused by my vulnerable situation, at the end of a 20-minute workout I was

New Paragarph at: Years later, when I showed those photos to my then-husband, they got both of us so