All Comments on 'Learning the Art of Love'

by MountainDewMan

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Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81about 3 years ago

Holy shit that was 🔥🔥🔥🔥. We love it.

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago

Wow, MDM! That was great!

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

Home at last ! Fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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another sick trash story...1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Life in its self

you are never to old to learn new things the art of Love and sex

tallman441tallman441about 3 years ago

Another awesome story mtdewman. I always look forward to reading your stories. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Another great story. Would have loved another page!!!

sp9983sp9983about 3 years ago

It was ok, just not as good as the second submission.

Jdavis77Jdavis77about 3 years ago
Ok

Love? I mean to be honest I don't see love a mom that learning to be more open but I don't see love. you made it OK at the dad was cheating but OK if that's how you like it

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 3 years ago

Interesting fantasy. Not quite as good as "The Dancer" but an enjoyable piece.

Cheers

SAGE

OOAAOOAAabout 3 years ago

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations!!

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 3 years ago

Hot and very sexy tale of sexual awakening. I hope they keep going and maybe even make a baby.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 3 years ago

Classic MDM story! Five stars and a favorite point!

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago

Loved it, MDM! Good story!

Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dabout 3 years ago

Oh fuck!!! Left me wrung out! Such incredibly good hot wet erotic incest! I fucking loved it! Please continue. This Daddys girl loved being mommy.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 3 years ago

“ It was like staring at a freight train and begging for it to hit me.”. What a great line and great story.

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Wow!

That was INTENSE and absolutely perfect.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 3 years ago

A very yummy story! One that I hope continues... Thank you!

LitboyblueLitboyblueabout 3 years ago

At the end did mom yell Martin, not Will? Was that planned? *5 loved the characters.

Diecast1Diecast1about 3 years ago

A good story, is there another chapter in the offer. AAA+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story but will should have fucked her earlier to stop the covid date. Will became martin once as she was about to suck him

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

Not flattering you…your writing ability is remarkable. Old Al hasn’t any idea how you go about it, but there is definitely something wrong if you cannot earn a living writing. The way you mold words to emotion is , i don’t know, unique doesn’t do it justice.

All I can say is thank you so very much for putting your talents on display here and allowing us to see what excellence truly looks like.

NadiePreguntameNadiePreguntameover 2 years ago

I have been reading all your stories, and seems clear to me your skills to paint a scene with words has improved greatly. Keep going ... while we truly enjoy !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good tale. It seems she was only a small part of her & her husband’s problem.

I wonder how he actually did with his honeys.

Well, it looks like she’s going to be fine from here on out.

Bill S.

TheOldStudTheOldStudalmost 2 years ago

This was actually a well-written and thought out story, BUT, the punctuation (or lack thereof) was atrocious. Still 5 stars...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Damn good story.

Anonymous
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