by Mystress_Carlie
Ma'am,
May I be the first of hopefully many to tell you what a wonderful story teller you are. You left me wanting more, which to me says its a better than average story.
Thank you for sharing.
This story was awesome, one of my all time favorites. I looke forward to more of your works.
Great story. Realistic characters and a real story to go with it - not just hot sex scenes with no real connection between them. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
I feel so much sympathy for the characters , especially for the girl. The whole story is wonderful and touching. The Joy of Young Lovers turning into natural born Sexy Creatures is incredible spicy to read; plus it's very nice to find such a
romantic story in this genre.
A fine and talented author you are. Thanks a lot for this effort !!!
Re reading this story after months! It's still think it a great read. Thankfully I dont remember every part so its like a whole new story :)