All Comments on 'Learning the Ropes'

Hot story. It would have gotten five stars if it had been longer.

Good story but it definitely needs to be a bit longer

Great start, can't wait for ch.2

Jesus son,

I was definitely expecting this story to be 2 to 3 pages based off the little description you put saying he makes his debut, but that never happens so I have to say it's quite misleading. Honestly I would not be the least bit surprised that this is the only story that these characters make an appearance in because you certainly have a long trend of creating characters for one story then never bringing them back in all the randomness that happens. I do hope I am wrong there though, a part 2 with him and Marie or Victoria would be hot.

enjoyed your story. Hope you continue with another chapter. Keep up the good work!

I enjoy stories like this. Completely imaginative and made for one obvious purpose. Some people on this site like to criticize writing like this, but I actually tend to enjoy these stories more than the ones that strive for realism. Please, please write more!

I hope you write a pt 2-3

This drivel was probably written by a modern day Jethro Biden. It's written by someone who only has "a fifth grade EJUCASHUN". When the mom "blended over", you know he meant "bended over". If you're desperate for a sequel to this, then you're either a convict in lockup or a registered sex offender. Either way, you are unable to be around women for legal reasons if you want more of this crap.

I hope like Hell you add more parts to this, it was pretty damn hot.