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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome imagination, but...

you really do rush through it. You have a great idea and some great situations, but there is no actual build up using them. By the time is starts getting to where it should be really interesting, bang, moving on. You need to slow down and elaborate some, but I think you really could make some knockout stories.

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Discovered the joy and pleasures of being naked at a young age...and then masturbation. Had a private dorm room where I was naked all the time. When I was single I would be naked and edging and on the net. Now, married, but still at home nudist.