All Comments on 'Learning to Trust'

by vampireicslave

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poupounepoupounealmost 15 years ago
A very good start

I'd like to see more of this story.

It could stand a bit more editing to improve the flow, but that will also be improved by more writing practice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent start

Everyone loves werewolves don't they? I like the trust element. Keep on with it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Nice

Don't understand why Rose is unable to speak. Am hoping future installments will explain this.

Love the story and am waiting anxiously for additional chapters.

thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
roar

I liked it love. You are rather interesting and well I liked it.

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