by Tara Cox
Sometimes, we never know why, things just work. Awesome story, for what you put in and what you didn't. Extremely well done.
Loves is found by many in strange places not forced and not planned just Angles doing their thing
As simple and emotional as it is, I like this story. When going through depression, one gets that lost feeling -- what's the point in life sort of effect. Ciao!
Hope to read more and more. Really love the way these two people mesh together. I know there is more to tell us. Will wait patiently
Everyone wants to be held and we all want to find",home"!
Short but nicely done and very complete. Just the way short story should be.
Also very true to PTSD it cuts you off from everyone else. You walk around behind a glass screen. Verbal abuse is harder to recover from than physical.
If you have suffered both you can cease to feel even human.
This is a good story. It does what s story should do...it gives you hope!
One day we will all find "home".
We know that there really are almost-lost souls who swim through the edges of our world, but usually never find a resting place. It would nice to think that every once in a while the almost-lost find each other and make a whole soul. This story suggests that sometimes this may happen. Thanks for the hint of hope. 5*
Tara, Tara! This so needs fleshing out. It's the bare bones of an idea for an excellent story...and you can do it. Only three stars from me for this draft which you need to expand and which calls out for your sensitive understanding and treatment of what are sadly two all too prevalent social problems in today's society.