All Comments on 'Leave Me Alone! Pt. 02'

loved it from beginning to a wonderful happy ending.

You maid some logic errors, you wrote he still hates them but I could feel no hate against anyone from him, and you write about Lizzy she is shy? I thought she was bitch like their mom and other sister??

5 stars. What a fun, sexy romp.

Great ending to the story, I hope to see more from this one, but it’s wrapped up with a neat little bow so that’s ok for now. I couldn’t believe it when I read Ginger’s answer for giving out his address so easily “She could never say no to bad boys...” what a pathetic answer. But it does answer the question as to why she fell onto Marks fathers dick so fast... can’t wait for your next story!

You can't be shy and be a bitch? news to me.

Enjoy the family mix. More please.

This is an outstanding story! thank you

Wonderful story!!! i hope you'll keep writing more incest stories!!

A brilliant story that I hated to see end. I hope you continue writing for many more years to come.

Had to give you 5 stars, though wanted to deduct a half, due to your spelling and grammar getting a tad sloppy - specially on the final page.

Otherwise, very fine, indeed!

Honestly, the sex is not what got me. Damn good story

great story needs a part 3

Loved the story. Loved the interaction and movement of the story. Would love more chapters. Thanks for your time and imagination.

One bit of advice, their-there and they're are homophones. They sound the same but mean vastly different things. You have a habit of using 'their' incorrectly, 4 times in 2 stories. A program like Grammarly would clean those issues up.

Please don't stop here keep it going

You did I once again, another amazing series. Thank you. Would love to read more about these characters.

...minus some glaring editing issues.

Stars off for the cliche´ 'giant penis' and 'huge boobs'.

I always wonder if the writers ever consider that not every guy dreams of a giant dick, but maybe of women happy with a normal one used well?

The whole "real man" thing is such a turn off.

great story. the only thing that would have made it better would have been an update on ginger that she was killed in jail =) but great story non the less.

I love the story, I think it is great. AAAAAA+++++

Ex gives up address for the family and doesn't expect jail time for conspiracy to commit murder?

Having Mark do Sally as payback for Bob's cheating was a pointless scenario.

Overall this story is great,but what would have made it near perfect is the inclusion of Stacy namely of her bearing Marks child.I would have loved if Stacy had given him a daughter and Jane,Stacy,and Mark had become parents to their two children and raised them as incest siblings.For Sally,Mom,Bob,and Lizzy they could just carry on with their lives the way they were.

But for Mark,Jane,and Stacy I am glad they could have a happy threesome relationship,even tho Jane seemed to have a Dom Type Personality especially toward Stacy I hope Jane never took it too far in abusing Stacy,but light dom/sub fun is okay.

I won’t be with any other girls Jane. 2 hours later he is in mom.

I’d like to read more of this, can we expect more in the future?

Would've loved to see Jane-Stacy-Mark as a triad throuple relationship.

You ruined yet another good story by the whole group sex and the cop with the sister basically you allowed Jane to pimp him,his mom and sisters out so much for a committed relationship Jane probably doesn't even know the meaning of it what a bitch

Ok I'm not too keen with the group sex thing with the other guy involved it wasn't helpful for the story as far as the cops and sisters deal he should have been more of a man when Jane first told him the police chief was up to no good he should have demanded to know what was going on right then and there and if she still wouldn't say he should have demanded to speak to the police chief and demanded from him what he is up too and then told Jane if she can't be fucking honest with him then it's not going to work out basically when he decided to forgive his family it became his job to protect them while the first time he failed cause caught off guard that part is understandable however he failed to even try to do something when Jane said that the police chief was up to no good cop or not he should have said something made her or him tell him what was going on he should have a say in the matter so in away what mfkndragon said about pimping his sisters out is completely correct and is extremely disrespectful to them he not at least trying to step up and protect them against that situation until he knew they had his sisters best interest at heart and his sisters agreeing to it shows he isn't a man other than that I think the only person who had any starting point of being forgiven was Stacy and i agree with Jane i believe at some point stacy did actually fall deeply in love with her brother the mom part with the parent in laws well i also disagree with that whole situation and him not demanding to know what is going on what her role will be and so forth as far as he knows they could be toruting her behind close doors and making her too scared to say anything and don't forget what his mother told him about her being his slave or in that case his slut she seemed to forget that little promise so quickly which says she didn't change 1 damn bit and will probably set it up for another man to fuck Jane while she gets her pussy ate by Jane it's simple she's a slut who doesn't care about anyone but herself that's why she was so easily to betray her son to start with

This was an amazing read I truly enjoyed all of it

I got confused on some parts but the story was fantastic ty

I found it a bit abrupt that those bad guys all of a sudden showed up. And the reason how/why was also kinda vague. Could've used more work tbh. Overall a nice story but some parts seemed rushed.

This whole thing had to be ruined by a stupid nonsense orgey

It started off well and by the end, it was a clusterfuck of unrealistic shit like the orgy. Everyone wants to fuck the guy with the 8 inch cock! Waste of my time. 1 star,