All Comments on 'Leaving for College'

A and b! Cool story! Thanks!

This story was both really sweet and incredibly hot. Keep up the good work, there's surely more adventures for the three of them in the future.

Let Brendan get them both pregnant...sis comes back from college pregnant...mom gets a surprise pregnancy as well

Great story. Getting settled in college and then Brendan taking both their asses would be great. Perhaps mom could meet and greet the new roommate as well.

I say if you can make all 3 ideas into different chapters not sequals.. but please continue with all and don't worry about the spelling ...no grades are given to my knowledge.

More please,,

Gotta get into their ass in follow up story.

I loved it! I vote parts A, B and C!!

I loved this story! I can’t wait to read more about Mom, Erica and Brendan ... and don’t forget to get Dad involved with Erica. The possibilities are virtually endless! Keep up the good work 🙂

So lesbo cunt munching is fucking??? Please retake Sex Ed 1 again. Author be a bit easier on your female characters. Poor sissy as described is a scum of the earth whore...

My only minor annoyance. Writers who use... You've got xxxxx.... essentially writing, You have got.....

Their asses.

Mom and Brendan help Erica get settled in at college

Go B!

Great story!

What a very lucky son and brother 2 be able 2 have sister and Mom

I’m on my phone making this comment because I wanted to let you know that this was a great story. It stands well on its own. Nice details and a great story! I only saw one error and your grammar/spell checker probably would not have caught it. Nicely done!

What's not to like about this story? Mom's not too old to get pregnant, and a vasectomy can be reversed. Dad will be there in a day or 2, and if Erica could seduce him, maybe he'd be able to enjoy sex again. She didn't have any trouble getting mom to eat her creampie, so I'm sure she could easily convince dad to fuck her too. It wouldn't be a bad thing for dad to get Erica pregnant after they find out that Brendan got his mom pregnant.

I think all 3 possible story lines would be great if combined all together. It may take several chapter/pages to write.

Write them all. Perfect reading

Love every word on the page!

Definitely taking both their asses

A really good read and am looking forward to seeing how they progress together.....they should keep dad out of it for a while I think.....maybe get Erica’s future roomie involved perhaps?

Good story it would be good to have him take both their arses in a public place somewhere

what about mommy turning into sons slut????

As a frequent flyer of airplanes, I'm attempting to understand how the airplane they're on has such a large bathroom.. usually bathrooms are pretty tiny.

WA NT TO SEE MOM TO GET PRGENATE

DAUGHTER COME HOME FOR HOLLIDAY;S FUCKS HER DAD

THEN ALL 4 FUCK TOGETHER AND SLLEP IN EACH OTHER ROOM'S

DAUGHTER CHANGES SCHOOL TO BE BACK HOME AND ALSO WANTS A CHILD FROM HER BROTHER

The daughter thinks and acts too much like a guy. More so than her brother.

Mom gets pregnant, has to explain it to dad, ends up with a 4some?

Is fucking for lesbians??? I have three words for that...NO IT ISN'T! Fucking is a dick into a pussy, not a dildo or pussy eating!!!

The story line was great. It made me want to be part of that family I ju

Just wished it would have done his sister one met time.

Chapter 2 needs to get Erica moved in. Brendan has taken 2 weeks vacation from work to help his sister get moved in to her freshman dorm .

Chapter 3 should involve Brendan going for his Masters of Jurisprudence degree during his sister's sophomore year at the same college where his younger sister getting her undergraduate degree in Business Administration. They graduate the same year. He becomes a lawyer and hires his sister as his office manager.

During their college years , they share an apartment.

Brendan takes both their asses please!!

Both Asses and the 3 move in together

The story is interesting and hot

Erika is certainly a slut. But it's not a real story, it's a fantasy. ;)

Now for the sequel:

Mom and Brendan help Erica get settled in at college

Brian and Erica are better off with their own apartment. And Mom can come visit.

Brendan takes both of their asses

Anal is a must. You can also have Erica give her mom anal fisting.

The trio have to sneak around when Dad

joins them

Dad is definitely not necessary in this story. Besides, he hasn't fucked Mom in a long time. So we shouldn't start.

At 51, Mom can't get pregnant. Unless she's dreaming in her wildest dreams. Erika, on the other hand, could get a big belly. Scene: Mom smears Brian's sperm all over Erica's big pregnant belly. A graduation present for her brother. :)

It for sure needs about sequels you mention. And maybe one where Brenda asks why can't he get a job near there and share and apartment. He does... Then have Mom come out for Christmas and surprisingly gets pregnant, she does not know what to do but her problem is solved when she goes to he husband's work to confess. Next chapter Mom shows up at the apartment distressed and crying "Dad" who has been fucking his secretary at work, when caught HE agrees to a quick divorce, and she wants to join the kids at the apartment and joins them. Next chapter mom meets a really understanding gynecologist who comes into the scene for mom's pregnancy and later play, which then evolves and involves with the kids.

Some of your stories do need to be a bit longer and detailed. Fill out the part of the mother and her distress at being married to the uptight and conservative Dad. You did not say in the first part where they were and where university was "half way across the country," Since it is a "Red Eye Special" those mostly go West to East. So a good shift would be going from California to Minneapolis, Chicago, or Dallas. Given the length of the flight Denver is too close and the East Coast way to far. :-)

Why didn't you write another part for this story

Not bad. Definitely hot and I hope you do more of this story.

Anyone of your possible parts for this was fine but leave the dad out all that will do is ruin it