All Comments on 'Leaving Home Pt. 02'

Another great chapter!

5

I love this story more and more so extremely well written that it has to be true.

The waiting time is difficult. Thank you for this!

You had better write more! Great story needs an R410a finish!

Cheers

SAGE

You have got to continue this tale

A wonderful story!!!

Absolutely wonderful. You are my newest 'great' author. I'm glad to see there is more. Dave and Emelie. Wonder what's going on with Clare.

This one is a great one.

Great

Yes, there is more to write about! ;) You have entrapped us with this tale that needs a stunning conclusion!

What a wonderful story. I like how this story is going but not looking forward to what may be leading up to something happening with Claire. Five stars for sure and so looking forward to the next chapter.

Like Dave's growing maturity -- both in his physical body and his mental thought. Like his chest hair -- Claire lies it too, and I'm sure Emelie will find her fingers enjoying tracing his hair. Please keep them growing in love together!

Absolutely loved this story and I await part 3 if you can summon the strength . You have a super way with wrds and a story . I`m now going to your list of Stories and pick another one to start .

Wonderfl writing! The wait will kill me.

Keep going! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Wonderful! Three love stories in one. I love it. Keep writing. . .

Spectacular storytelling as always.

Really sweet tale, well plotted and well written. Looking forward to Part 3. 5*

YES PLEASE…..MORE PLEASE

5 stars.

BUT one point of constructive criticism: Errors in grammar and usage are blemishes you owe it to yourself to avoid. Please learn the difference between "lie" and "lay" and between "rise" and "raise." "Lie" (past tense "lay" and past participle "lain") and "rise" (past tense "rose" and past participle "risen") are intransitive verbs. "Lay" (past tense "laid" and past participle "laid") and "raise" (past tense "raised" and past participle "raised") are transitive verbs. Spend a few minutes on Google or Bing to learn the difference.

WONDERFUL STORY, as usual! You are a master!

dont want it to end

After making my 1st comment earlier I scanned a few made by others

I have no problem with uncorrected typos, spelling n grammar mistakes imho they can convey the level of passion n involvement u hav in getting the story down its ur story u can tell it the way u want sure maybe conforming to norms may get u more readers dunno maybe lose some we like to express our selves as individuals esp in a subject as intimate