All Comments on 'Leaving Home Pt. 03'

An excellent tale! Thank you for sharing it.

I especially liked the reuse of the postage stamp analogy. When you first put that out, I stated that I was going to "steal" it for my own use, and I did,

Positive, affirming stories seem to be in short supply nowadays, so, again, thank you!

A beautiful tail, very well written

From one old guy to another, wonderful story, my Friend, wonderful story. I'll leave it at that along with 5 stars.

Cheers

SAGE

Great story, R! Loved every word!

This is a beautiful and well-written story. It is well told and captivating. In times like these, people could learn some lessons from this tale. The punctuation and spelling leave a bit to be desired, but it does not detract from the story, in my opinion! Great job, as is usual, and I look forward to the next one.

Loved the story.

Thanks for Sharing.

This comment is more for LIt than Author.... How are these similar stories????

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I rely on the similar stories to find new stories, I don't like cheating and this story had no cheating so why are all the story suggestions about cheating?!?!

These stories were great. It is obvious that you have a farm connection; your descriptions of the combines, equipment and harvesting operations are authentic. Raising dairy in California is also fraught with challenges. I know the area that you write about… but your experiences with Claire and Emelie are foreign to me! Thanks for sharing.

What a wonderful story. When I got to the part "we'll still be sitting on the porch holding hands enjoying the sunsets", I got really choked up. That's what my wife and I had planed for when we grew old, but it wasn't to be. We did get to set outside in the gazebo where she lived and spent her final days, but it wasn't the same. I guess that's why I love happy endings like this one. Thanks.

This was a great story. Even for a 65 yr old man, I shed a few tears!!!

Lovely story!

5

Thank you for this very enjoyable read. I must say that I always like your stories and this is one of the best.

This chapter, as well as those before it, was sweet, sexy, and totally delightful. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. 5*

Liked it, but there's mention of them having four children after five (Claire, Ernesto, Andrew, Marcea, Tiffany) were born.

Thank you a hundred times over. I cried near the end

As always a very emotional ending, very well done.

Simply beautiful.

Nice! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Liked it, but there's mention of them having four children after five (Claire, Ernesto, Andrew, Marcea, Tiffany) were born.

Great storyline, and well told. One of your best

Wonderful story and amazingly well written. I think this must have been a labor of love for you.

A very well presented story. A most enjoyable read. Thank you very much for your efforts.

WONDERFUL STORY, AS ALWAYS! Claire helped Dave become a man, and too bad he couldn't have given her a baby. Claire knew he needed Emelie as a wife, and gave Dave, her second "husband" to her by insisting he needed Emelie as his wife, soulmate, and mother to his children. Together, they made Claire a "grandmother" and added time to her life. Dave was not only her lover, he filled the role of son...

I cannot imagine a romance story being better.

veryy well written I new beyond a dout that clair wasas going to die damn I hate it when I'm right but now one lives forever do they five

I keep saying that the story I had just read. is the best, but then I read the next story, and that one is. Well, this story beats them all. Starting when the man was just a young innocent. boy learning! how to grow up, and become a loving husband, and father. Thank you for a great story. 15 stars.

amazing story esp after reading last paragraph what r we without hope even if unfulfilled hopelessly idealistic

most exceedingly important I didnt notice one instance of foul language and most especially abuse of the name of the supreme being first time ive read a story which didnt i was not particularly looking out 4 it(possibly i am mistaken) however I do notice it when reading many writers use a lower case for the first letter(rather than customary capital, which is some acknowledgement) yep i know my comments will upset most n probably not pass review if possible id like 4 u at least 2 c my comment I also find it so interesting that one never comes across the abusive use of other peoples supreme being

I did make a comment before then reading all those previously made i noted that u didnt receive one negative comment to date I have not read a story here that didnt have a negative comment