All Comments on 'Lebanon Hostage Ch. 07'

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SumacandIvySumacandIvyover 10 years ago
Another Good Chapter

As always compelling and seductive. Strong story and strong writing.

Morrigan_Morrigan_over 10 years ago

Great chapter:) And I think that Alan is actually jealous of Jeremy for his feeling for the guard.

nanobotnanobotover 10 years ago
a work of greatness

I envy your storytelling. When he crawled to the door I actually stopped reading for a few minutes because I couldn't bear the thought of his being caught!

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