All Comments on 'Lebanon Hostage Ch. 07'

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nanobotnanobotover 10 years ago
a work of greatness

I envy your storytelling. When he crawled to the door I actually stopped reading for a few minutes because I couldn't bear the thought of his being caught!

Morrigan_Morrigan_over 10 years ago

Great chapter:) And I think that Alan is actually jealous of Jeremy for his feeling for the guard.

SumacandIvySumacandIvyover 10 years ago
Another Good Chapter

As always compelling and seductive. Strong story and strong writing.

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