by Ionitia
What a wonderful beginning to a story! Brilliant writing! I already feel like I know the characters from the way you write. I can't wait for the next chapters following. The only thing I can suggest if I may? Longer chapters. When a story is as good as this one, the reader doesn't want it to end after only one page. It leaves us frustrated, hahaha. But seriously...other than that, I think so far it's PERFECT!
A good promising start..... Sorry to see there is no update! I love the feel of this romance!
Thank you for so many lovely comments - I promise that an update will be on it's way!
PLEASE write the next installment!! It's been a damned year!