All Comments on 'Legend of Mustang Sally Pt. 01'

After putting up with so many grammatical errors, I lost count, I realized the 3 stars was way overrated. Please, forget any future chapters.

It may be a good idea for both Brian and yourself to get the assistance of an editor.

Did Brian (aka Brain) actually edit the version of this story that you submitted? If so, then I can only assume that your editor is the cartoon character from the tv show Family Guy. This is one of the worst edited stories that I've ever read. You need to get a new editor in a hurry. One star.