by CaptJackAubrey
Been reading this story since the beginning. Was expecting a well-written, simple incest story, but what I got was a kinky, bisexual, generational incest story with lots of arousing scenes which is still worth a read despite the gay sex. I hope the kids get to spend time with their grandparents before the story ends.
Thanks! I worried about the flashbacks, but they were well done and developed. Very much enjoyed the series, well developed and executed. Ready for the screenplay, or a cable TV series, The McPhersons! More please, lots left for development.
After reading all of these I must say that these are by far the best stories I have read. The flashbacks really add to the story, as I read i could really picture the whole story. It was all very well written, I am looking forward to reading more submissions.
I have just read all 5 chapters and I can honestly say this straight guy of 62 years has just bought himself his first ever anal toys and added quite a few things to his bucket list, great read and thank you
Is a really good story. Adding another chapter or several? Would be nice to have a really good ending.