All Comments on 'Leilani'

Brava! Loved reading it.

Thoroughly enjoyed this piece — call it a Rom-Com, whatever. Tempted to say best, but no way. You create interesting characters around a page turning storyline that is not only fun to read but resonates — even some poignant moments. Have commented on some of your other pieces, and the common denominator for me is how much you enjoy sharing/writing. Dialogue is spot on; fun to imagine your characters together. Hope you continue to share. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Enjoyable and fun. It feels like it has the potential to be expanded into a longer piece with the characters more fleshed out.

Light (?) and lovely. ❤️❤️❤️

Clever. Very clever. The snappy one-liners are great. Arizona speed limit? This story moved at the speed of light. I could hardly keep up, but it was well worth the trip.

Just great!